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Okay, quite interesting description.
*Start reading* I'm hope that this story like it description.
10872313
Don't get too excited! it's just an establishing shot, pretty dry stuff. I tried my best to pretty it up though lol.
10872314
Yep. That's why you shoot my mood down when I'm finish the first chapter. *Sigh* really funny that your protagonist is like an blank paper. Purity Sue much?
10872321
pffft yeah, I only did it for the dolans and because a friend asked me to and it shows. Admittedly not super proud of this one but my word is my bond lol.
10872327
Wow cruel, aren't you? I hope he not disapponted about this fic.
10872333
Yeah me too, i really tried but the spark just wasn't there <:(
10872334
:P. R.I.P you for sinking in a "quick-sand"
P/S: wanna review my fic?
10872340
I did not see this sorry! Sure! I do not think I am any position to analyze other people's fics since I am not very good at them yet myself, but I can give my opinion on it! link away ^^
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Alright then. Here you are.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/493830/the-adventures-begin
P/S: I'm doing the epilogue
I like this so far, but it looks like it will never be completed. I guess you were paid for only 2 chapters.
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I've been debating giving this another shot actually, rewriting this on my own time, if only because it stings to moss twice on the same story and I wanna try again lol. Maybe a side project >:3
11072115
Sounds good. Still I like the idea of having him being magical chilled for the first few days of arriving. Suggestion have him literally land on Twilight when he arrives.