It was a simple question: could the Mirror Portal be used to travel to dimensions other than the one that held Canterlot High?
But as we all know, simple questions can spiral into grand adventures — especially when Twilight and her friends find themselves in a whole new place with a brand new attitude.
Having been turned into denizens of this world, the group partakes in many misadventures.
I realized that most of my stories are rather serious, so I wanted to write something more light-hearted.
Chapters (4)
HA!
This first chapter was... decent. The banter between the Mane 6 was characterful, but it’s odd that the were so willing to abandon all their commitments without question. The illustrations are cute, but they’d look better as the cover than embedded between the text.
So far, there’s not much to set this apart from other Pokémon crossovers, except that the characters who were transformed into Pokémon don’t seem to understand them automatically. In particular, the setup reminds me of a fic called Rescuers of Harmony, which also involves all the Mane 6 being turned into Pokémon after Twilight summons a portal, including Pinkie Pie becoming a Swirlix.
Also, Rufflet is always male. Have I read enough Starscribe to know where this is going, or...?
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I actually completely missed that; that gives me SO MANY IDEAS!
Edit: Well, it gives me an idea.
Nice doge whit the hat.
Well that was quick.
This chapter feels rushed. The battle in particular feels too short; how does Rainbow feel about being attacked?
A pet peeve of mine is "what the hay is a Pokémon?" exposition because it's rarely interesting and grinds the pacing to a screeching halt. The scene just ends abruptly with no hints at what's to come.
It's Ash and Pikachu. The dynamic duo of the anime show. I wonder what adventure Ash is gonna get dragged into! Train to be the very best!
I don't like that you call Pikachu a rat, its a mouse pokemon. Ratatta and Raticate, now they are rats. Also, pokemon can understand each other, so the mane6 and Spike would have understood Pikachu.
They should still be able to understand Pikachu for being pokemon themselves.
Ok, so this isn't Gen1 Ash, since you said he was aware of 860 different pokemon, then is this Gen7 or 8 Ash?
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Actually, I've had this story on the back burner since January (at the very latest).
But yeah, I can see your point. The battle was meant to show just how out-of-their-element they are, but I suppose it could've lasted a bit longer.
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My logic for them not being able to understand Pokéspeak is that, since they can still speak English (or Equish, or whatever), they can't understand Pokéspeak. Except for Fluttershy.
And this is meant to be between Gen 7 and Gen 8 (to where he's heard of the Galar Region, but hasn't yet visited).
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Ok, oh and a pokemon is released from its ball in white light, and recalled in red light
Well put keep going
There r 898 pokemon last I checked
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"It's somewhere around 890."
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https://www.pokemon.com/us/pokedex/ check it out I watched the first episode that ever came out in 1998 I am an og for pokemon I check the pokedex often
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What I meant was "I know that, and Ash (roughly) knows that, too."
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Ok waiting for next chapter keep the good work up
Keep going! It’s interesting me already! I LOVE IT!!!
Hmm, if the mirror is turned of right now would it conect to another univers next time it's acktivated?
Amazing i see potential in this fic
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Twilight took note of the thaumic frequency the portal was set to, so she can tune it to the correct dimension again.
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Thank you!
Oui! It is getting better!
Since he finished the Kalos region, are they gonna head to Alola?
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This series actually takes place between S&M and Journeys; he mentioned Kalos specifically because it's the furthest away from Kanto he's been at this point.
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But are they gonna go to Alola?
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Maybe, maybe not. I haven't decided much.
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It’s okay, you can take your time thinking about it.
Wait, they can go back and forth at any time? My memories if the first two chapters are vague, but I was under the impression that they were trapped in another world like most fanfics of this kind.
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They're using the same portal they use in Equestria Girls, meaning it runs on that logic.
Keep going! I LOVE IT! Under the Alolan Sun/Moon, Pokémon!
when you only see two out of tre....
Prepar for truble!
10 bits say Meowth would slowly fell for Fluttershy. I mean, who wouldn't?
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He has always been a hopeless romantic, hasn't he?
Okay, now things are getting much interesting.
Hope a new chapter comes soon.
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And make it double
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To protect the world from devastation
Guess Pikachu won’t be Team Rocket’s only target…
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To unite all people within our nation
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Poke dollars mean Meowth got an idea to make Team Rocket some more cash.
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To denounce the evils of truth and love
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To extend our reaches to the stars above
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Jessie!
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And James!
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Team Rocket blasts off at the speed of light!
On second thought, Pokémon Journeys it is. Unless this is during Pokémon Sun and Moon Anime “Alola, Kanto!”
Okay, forget it. Definitely Pokémon Journeys.
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Surrender now, or prepare to fight!
Despite the short length of the chapters they are pretty fun to read. I look forward to what comes next.
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I'm glad you think so! "Quality over quantity", right?