• Member Since 3rd May, 2019
  • offline last seen 1 hour ago

Jhoira


Time to write some fanfiction! Yay! If you have any thoughts comment! I find reading them fun!

T
Source

This story is a sequel to Great Gym


Applejack and Rainbow Dash ask Rarity if she wants to be a part of their ongoing relationship. She doesn't take it well in the immediate aftermath. After she calms down a little she has to sit down and seriously think about the best decision for everyone involved. Whether or not she actually does what is best...


As usual, I'm weird with my word counts.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 20 )

Okay, Applejack and Rainbow's arguing makes this whole thing just brilliant.

I was hoping to see a sequel to the last one, so I'm excited for this!

You almost had me upset there. But then again, none of the shipfics you've written that I've read has ended poorly, so I suppose I should have a bit more faith.

There we go. That's the ending I was hoping to see.

I really love the dynamic you wrote between these three. Especially Dash, because I unashamedly think she's the best. She does seem like the type to make all the dirtiest jokes, so that had me smiling.

Excellent work as always! I'll have to imagine what happens after this. In the meantime, have a like!

10673869
That's the appledash appeal right there.

Congratz, you got featured. 2/11/2021

RDT

Mhmmm. Liked the dynamics.

10673888
Muhahaha! Yes, dance at my fluffy fiddle!

10674263
Thanks.

10674927
Yay! ^.^

I'm mirin these word counts, and that goes to the first story as well. :twistnerd:

Not gonna lie or exaggerate here. If read a while sure based on this. Excellent characterization, they felt real throughout.

As usual, I'm weird with my word counts.

what?
how?
why?

a few too may "darlings", but other than that the characters are perfect 👍

11002512
Hehe, look at the word counts for what. How? With editing. Why? *Shrugs.*

P.S. There's never too many darlings!

A color that matched that cute blonde hair of hers, those green eyes.

This genuinely took me a second to process.

11002534
Oh Jeez....you just gave me another idea.

There's never too many darlings!

and there's the title.

It'll be PG. I swear.

okay this was good. I liked it.

Chapter 2 was definitely amazing. Rarity would do ALL of those things.

now where does it go from here?
I wanna see some cute throuple fluff fics.

11002583
Maybe, in the mean time you can always read my other cute fluff ships :D

Dash's admitting to ogling followed by "What?" is peak RD. :rainbowlaugh:

"This is going to be interesting." Rainbow Dash observed.

And it's over! :duck:

This would be a fun world to explore. I haven't read many polyamory fics, but it might be interesting with the trio's dynamic for some drama.

Was a little lost in the beginning until it was established that AJ and Rainbow Dash were a thing then everything made sense. I love the banter between Rainbow Dash and AJ because it fits their characters perfectly.

Oooo I feel that there will be a Fluttershy Trixie fic in the future. :raritywink:

Login or register to comment