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DeathToPonies
sup! im really kind and love the show and its charaters but you know how it be when those tingly feelings get involved. like my style? talk to me about custom stories and comissions!
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Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?
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i dunno you tell me
10614451
Don't destroy your eyes. Don't do it. Don't it man. I haven't read it, but when you see dislikes like this, you will be needing to wash your eyes out with bleach.
10614489
don't knock it till you try it
on the real let me know what ya dont like about it :)
Okay, so I was morbidly curious from all the downvotes and had to give this a read.
I will say you put an impressive amount of effort into this story, going so far as to add three separate illustrations, two of them mildly animated. Under normal circumstances, I would commend this level of dedication to the craft. It's just disappointing that it was applied to, ah, this particular subject matter.
Yeah, I won't mince words, it was pretty nasty. At the same time, it also felt a bit like it was trying too hard. The plot was pretty contrived and escalated pretty damn quickly, though I understand this is first and foremost a porn fic meant to cater to people with a snuff fetish, so I can overlook that.
Also, I'm a bit miffed you actually managed to make me laugh. Not at Blueblood's acronym, that was another example of tryhard edge. No, I ended up chuckling at Sweetie Belle frantically trying to masturbate as she died. The sheer absurdity of that is what got the laugh out of me. Until that point, she was the only canon character in this fic who wasn't massively OOC.
The one other thing that made me laugh is likely a typo. You said the monster was "blowing jazz" into Sekkachi. The mental picture of some tentacle beast blowing a trumpet into a mare's unmentionables was hilarious.
My final verdict: I didn't enjoy this fic. But I didn't expect to enjoy it, and I was prepared to not enjoy it. My curiosity has been sated.
Have a good day, and may God have mercy on your soul.
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haha thanks for the feedback dude even if you hated it having a person really type out a reaction to the story is more help to me than the 27 silent dislikes
I fixed the jazz typo, but keep imagining it your way, its more fun
To be honest that was crazy in a good way. Thanks I like it but I kind of hated the beast.
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Whyd you hate it?
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The beast thing behind Satan though but it had a good plot
this is the first time I've seen a fic with images inside it; for that, and because this feels like something made for giggles for people that don't mind the morbidity of the fic, you get a like from me
Also, do you know other fics with pics on them? it caught me off guard but if you did it then others may have also done it, and I want to see how others would implement that.