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DeathToPonies


sup! im really kind and love the show and its charaters but you know how it be when those tingly feelings get involved. like my style? talk to me about custom stories and comissions!

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It's the aftermath of what could have been a cataclysmic event. The Sun, however, was defeated successful, and now slowly sinks beyond the distant skyline, never to be seen again. Moving forward, Equestria will be powered by artificial light. Surveying the aftermath, Twilight, Celestia, and Sunset have a short conversation about it.

Of course, since these ponies already know what happened, no further context is necessary.


Written for Bean's Writing Group. Art with NovelAI.

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This story sounds like it needs to be expanded on. Will you do that?

Who knew when the sun would rise again?

Who knows when the sun will rise again. :rainbowlaugh:
https://youtu.be/btMbDTqGsT4?si=ZOOjttC63sXLKtt_

Of course, space was rather directionless, as Twilight absolutely knew, but it was the easiest way to explain what was happening to a layman. In reality, the sun had simply lost its control over the Equestrian planet and was being repelled by its gravitational field instead of pulling it towards its own - it was all rather complicated and not necessary for any one pony to know.

Complicated only because this is not how this works. It would be the planet that's being pushed away by the star. They're called orphan worlds. Planets thrown out of their solar system, and left abandoned in the void.

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i 100% knew this when writing this section (to be clear - i didnt know the specifics, i knew someone would correct me cause i knew i was wrong lol), so thanks! if im feeling spicy ill go back and write this part to be more accurate...i didnt even make it 24 hrs before the correction haha

It a interesting premise, make for a longer story, the problems from losing the sun are more then light, heat, no tidal shift, no wind, the rain cycle would stop, the massive effort needed to prevent global extinction would take everything twlight and the world working together, but hey I'm looking too deeply

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