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DeathToPonies


sup! im really kind and love the show and its charaters but you know how it be when those tingly feelings get involved. like my style? talk to me about custom stories and comissions!

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Rainbow Dash is fine.

Written for the Quills and Sofas Poetry Slam Contest on 9/9/22. My prompt poem can be found in the authors notes.

EDIT: FEATURED! Told you I’d make it, mom.

I've decided not to tag a key story element for the purpose of keeping spoilers down. This tag is not anything conventionally disgusting, anything to do with snuff, or any fetish. If you are sensitive to dark content, please view the tag below:

Trigger warning: Suicide

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Trigger warning: Suicide

Why isn't there a tragedy tag?

11357805
thanks for the heads up. my bad

11357811
I feel I should also mention there's a Suicide/Selfharm tag that I would HIGHLY recommend for a story with that trigger warning.

11357949
Im always worried about spoilers. I’m afraid of spoiling the ending of a story to people who care about it, while I also understand it’s important to give warnings to those who do: this is why I settled for the description. Let me know if this is not allowed or frowned upon.

11357968
Ohh, I see, I see.

I may let some tears go when I read this

11357805
I'm really not seeing why the two necessarily have to go together.

11358405
I’d agree that, in a genre sense, this story is absolutely a tragedy, and unlike the tag I avoided, that’s not a spoiler. So I went ahead and added it

I have to say, I'm still not sure what happened in this story.

11359599

The story presents Rainbow Dash, hovering in the middle of a storm over an unknown ocean, far away from land. At the beginning, it's not entirely clear why. As she convinces herself that she's fine, we transition to a flashback showing Applejack sick in bed with some kind of illness, as well as learning that the two appear to be in a relationship. Through several more flashbacks, we see glimpses of Rainbow Dash's attempts to convince the others that she's fine after Applejack's passing. Rainbow Dash flies up into the sky above the storm, and as she sees the clear, peaceful sky, she has one final memory of a tender moment with Applejack, before plummeting down towards the ocean, performing a Sonic Rainboom, and crashing straight into the water at supersonic speed, presumably killing herself.

OH FUCK OFF YOU CAN'T HIT ME WITH EMOTIONS LIKE THAT AND THEN MAKE ME LOOK AT A PICTURE OF DREAM

but yeah it's a really cool story <3

poor dash...

That's what the point of the mask is...

A good little introspective dive, though mind your ellipses and genre tag usage. The author’s note is honestly psychic agony though smh.

11509854
and when they ask me how i'm doing i say i'm just fine

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