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A battle for Equestria has taken flight into Cloudsdale. The mane six are the only hope at saving not only the kingdom, but the princesses as well. When Rainbow Dash is tossed from the foray and Fluttershy fails to save her, the remaining ponies must come to terms with their heavy loss. And Applejack will cause a rift between herself and her friends, as she blames Fluttershy for letting it all happen.
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Looks interesting. I have been toying with a similar idea revolving around Applejack.
Dreadnought
RD's dad is Bow Hothooves,
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Yeah, this was written before I knew that, or before the episode that first showcased him aired.
Certainly was a tear-jerker good job at tugging at the heartstrings
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Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it! Writing the story tugged at my heart too, so i'm glad that made it out for you as well.
Noice
Ok he can change is cutie mark at will? Badass
Who is this Rainbow Blaze pony? Also I was gonna say making Dash a wonderbolt at her funeral is cliche but then I realized I did the same thing.
I know it's late, but I finally took the time to fix the mishaps with Dash's dad's name, and also spelling "filly" as "philly". I suppose it's better late than never, but the spelling is fixed.
This sure was emotional. It hurt seeing Applejack being so hard on Fluttershy. But at the same time, I can understand how she must have been feeling. With the death of her parents, I can see why she would be the most affected by this and would let her emotions get the better of her
One thing I don't quite understand though is how Applejack came to her change of heart at the end. I mean, she spent most of the story blaming Fluttershy for Rainbow's death. So how did Fluttershy's absence from the funeral cause her to realize her mistake?
I'm confused. You have this Sonic Dash Character saying he's Rainbow's father but then you also have Bow hothoof, her actual father here too. It was a decent funeral scene. Just a little confusing
Very nice chapter. Angle is a male thought.