I wish I was enough. But I'm not and never will be.
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I think this works so well as an intro chapter. It's possible I'm biased.
I'm always a sucker for writers who play with time, telling a story out of order. The fact that we open In Medias Res with the pregnancy test works to add quite a bit of drama to the actual sex scene, imbuing it with more weight than simple clop.
Well done, fun beginning, and I love where this is going.
I really like this! I'm excited for more.
pet and master! this is getting good... I may not like equestria girls that much but. I do love the pet and master though and how it's brining along with some other future content for future chapters? 0_o
Looks good. Keep up the good work.
Very interesting ending for this fiction. Now I'm 100% curious.
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I'm glad to hear it! I'm also pleased you liked reading this. There will be a sequel / companion story about Wildfire getting to college released on Friday. Hope to see you there.