• Published 28th Nov 2020
  • 1,973 Views, 83 Comments

The student and the Princess: Best of both worlds - Postwarmonkey50



An ordinary teenager, who tries to live his life in CHS, feels as if he has nothing to look forward to. But what would happen, if a certain Princess from Equestria, would come his way. Would he be alone, or will he win her heart?

Comments ( 6 )

Really nice way to end this tale. Glad I took the time to read this way back when and stuck with it. I enjoyed it. Can't wait to see what your next story will be.

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Thanks. Appreciate the support

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No problem. You deserve it.

To the author - Amazing story!:raritystarry:😍
omg so much impact here. it's gonna be a lot (for me) to give my thoughts about each chapter😵

some critiques though...if you ever do a sequel for this fic:unsuresweetie:

1. when the characters are talking/speaking to each other it should be double quotation marks.

2. thoughts should be italicized for i was slightly confused & a little bit annoyed that it was in same plain front! 💢

3. the songs should be in Bold when they're singing!

Comment posted by Postwarmonkey50 deleted Mar 30th, 2022

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I was following Oliver Bowden's style.

He wrote the Assassin's creed books.

We all have different writing styles.

Besides, I checked at least 20 other authors in the fansite and theirs is not good either.

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