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I'm a man who loves stories, and I love getting into them. They inspire me to be a writer.

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As every creature except Princess Celestia left the room, she had a devious smirk on her lips. She conjured the ingredients for the formula, including Anon’s pheromones that he kept in a jar, which she was a little surprised about that. She began to mix them up a bit, and once completed, she placed each of them in their drinking glasses. However, did something unexpected. One had Spike’s pheromones and put it in a glass that was marked Rarity, whilst the other she added Rarity’s pheromones in Spike’s glass.

She strikes again! :trollestia:

awesome story mate keep it up cant wait for the next story:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

But through her sleep, her body began to lightly shake and appeared to be growing bigger. Right about 6.9 feet tall, nearly as tall as Anon. Her chest grew slightly between an H-Cup and a J-Cup, her legs peaked from the blanket and were now over her bed, whilst her body had gained curves.

"6.9 feet tall, nearly as tall as anon" i think you made a mistake or anon is 7 foot lol

Alright, nice story. However, it is hard to follow along sometimes without the proper usage of ". Not trying to be negative but look at literally any other story and see how characters typically talk like in "this sort of way." while 'thoughts are typically done as like this, or even in just italics.' Main reason being it is just so much easier on the eyes.

This was certainly a…interesting read, was enjoyable as well may be one chapter but ya fit in character building, world building, and romance in some way and not just straight porn I won’t lie I’d like to see a sequel to this that’s maybe a full on story but if not witch I find to be the most likely case it was a good story so thanks for the nice read!

Source for the pic?

“Whatever.” said Anon as he made the list disappear. He crossed his arms and said ‘seriously, and you gave all of us a hard time because of the many mistakes we made. More importantly you’re not as smart as you think.”

Jesus, this whole rant was so long and blunt it felt like I was reading the 7-page muda but he's just beating Twi over the head with her numerous fuck ups.

I loved it.

I thought she was going to get big not just adult form

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Hey there, just to give a heads up, I'm gonna write a sequel to this soon, so be ready.

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Oh? Well I look forward to it eagerly then!

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Alright then, I just posted the first chapter. Took your advice and I'm going to do it chapter for chapter.

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