This story is a sequel to Bonds of love what if
After the night Gallus had a breakdown and Smolder stopped him from hurting himself she's been on edge and worried about him even more.
(Edited by the amazing summer script himself thanks man you both inspired me to write 2 fics and are a great help)
(the suicide tag is for the subject matter being discussed in the first chapter and is from events in first fic before this one)
(PS its highly recommended you read both the bonds of love by summer script and the bonds of love what if i writ to understand what happens in this fully)
Chapters (3)
I want everyone seeing this to know while gallus being a little bit suicidal it’s not met to be the focus and I really hope I’ve not caused offence I couldn’t just gloss over events that occurred in the bonds of love what if I made as this is a continuation of those events I just hope I portrayed things ok.
also yes I made a reference to https://www.fimfiction.net/user/103506/Dawn+Flower fic cards against equestria
Let's get the nitpicks out of the way:
We left a few words bolded here by accident.
Needs to be underlined.
Other than that, I think we did good, dude!
I'm really glad my story inspired you so much! It really means a lot!
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Done lol
If anyone wants to know how the original between Gallus and smolder conversation went well your going to need to read summer scripts https://www.fimfiction.net/story/467104/the-bonds-of-love chapter9 as the conversation that happens is in there story this is just a smolder centred of those events while carrying events from my bonds of love what if story.
So next chapter it’s gonna be a bit different on a few key moments
Everyone I messed up a bit continuity wise will clean it up when I get a chance