nice job dude.

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Thanks and yes I know spoilers lol

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Oh and the interactions with Weiss will be getting a bit more hilarious untill they finally have a fight

10463219
that i can't wait to see.

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Still I didn't come across to mean did i

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no.

Keep up the good work.

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np hope i gave artic abd rust a good mini intro

Not bad. What would really help your story is an editor/co-writer to help extend your chapters as well as take care of any spelling errors

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that would be great

ok currently under a edit thanks to Valiant Charge and could get some chaoter padding

i hope a new chapter is on the way.

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it is i get side tracked alot

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ok then.