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redsopine
hiii just a heads up but anytime somone is kind enough to use my ocs has permission to use anytime (just no clop without me either asking or being asked)
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Dude, put quotation marks around the characters’ dialogue.
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Ok will get on that right now I forget to add them sometimes thanks for reminding me but besides that how's the chapter
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Is that better I just went though added the quotation marks to the sentence and a few spaces to make bits stand out
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It’s pretty good. There are some errors but you know.
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Still working on getting better at writing lol
This would've been really good if only it was readable.
this has potential, but you really need to put points and commas cause it's really hard to read
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Workong on getting a editor
First problem I see. Do you have permission to write this as a sequel to the original story? Not saying you can't write it.
But most authors, if they don't do it themselves, I'd think prefer that people ask, and get permission to do it. In case they want too.
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I asked permission beforehand only reason I'm attempting it and yes it's under edit because I'm bad at spacing the speaking bits I have it in the description thanking the author for giving me permission to do it
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Also sent a pm because your the first to want to helpful critic it if you wanted to
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It's going under a revision thanks for the feedback and I know work on making it readable lol just revaluating it
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Heya but it’s finally been updated and edited hope it’s better now
Also I want feedback as I’ve taken a year to redo and edit this
Is this dead
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Nope just waiting for my editor/co writer to be free for this