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Predator2525


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Comment posted by Starlight Nova deleted Jan 20th, 2021
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Comment posted by Brother Roga deleted Jan 21st, 2021

I applaud you, for this is the greatest troll-fic I've seen to date.

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Goddammit thats the problem.....I did edited the entire Fic, but because of how stupid my Wi-Fi is....I'm guessing some of it didn't go through.....hang on I'll try to fix it.....also I didn't hit a writers block at the end....my Epilogues are known to be short, because I simply wrap the story up, if there was a sequel.......then I might go into more depth....besides what more story is to be told? Also for your third comment you could say that in your opinion , but for me its different

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You could say that in a way.....lol....Oh this is not going to be a Sparityfic

*A few chapters later*

Psyche.....it's not just Rarity he's getting, but also three other mares as well

Spike did his best of hiding the pain of his wound's, but it was better than not being dead. Spike had to beatdown an Ulsa Major, just for him, Rarity, and Chrysalis to stay the night, and get patched up. Out here the place was dangerous, the wild predator's seemed to roam the land's, and the skies. There was also the constant threat of the Demon Dragon's doing their best to find the Dragonbourne, and to kill him at all cost's. Although for what it was worth, sometime's Spike didn't mind being in the caves, and in the hotel's of some of these strange villages.

Spike did his best of hiding the pain of his wound's, but it was better than not being dead. Spike had to beat down an Ursa Major, just for him, Rarity, and Chrysalis to stay the night, and get patched up. Out here the place was dangerous, the wild predator's seemed to roam the land's, and the skies. There was also the constant threat of the Demon Dragon's doing their best to find the Dragonbourne, and to kill him at all cost's. Although for what it was worth, sometime's Spike didn't mind being in the caves, and in the hotel's of some of these strange villages.

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Look's like that's another chapter that need's to be edited....thank's for pointing that out...I'll have to look for which chapter that is to take care of that....I do edit all my Fic's before I release them, and it's a very rare occasion that my edit's don't go through...and the cause is a combination of a stupid keyboard, and Wi-fi that is so drunk it can't even tell what's up, or down, or what even a word is.

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So that's the Chapter huh....well thankfully I can edit it now, and I'm also going to inspect other chapter's to see if they are edited correctly.

This story is amazing It was a great idea and i liked it

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Thank you, although I had to do some last minute edit's to make the story easier to read, but yeah it's a very good story, and was an idea I wanted to do

Comment posted by NasihaBrony deleted Jan 25th, 2021
Comment posted by Predator2525 deleted Feb 4th, 2021

The way Bourne is spelled reminds me of the Bourne movies or is it skyrim's version of Bourne. Cause I want to say it's like the Bourne movies.

Comment posted by NasihaBrony deleted Jan 26th, 2021
Comment posted by Predator2525 deleted Feb 4th, 2021

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Lol, that's what my friend's told me lol

wow.. just wow, after so long and going through so many stories i found a story to hold me in and fulfill my desires in a story. this has only happened with one other story and it was called a dragons requiem and i must say that your story was amazing and scratched that ich that i'v felt ever since i read a dragons requiem, and so i must thank you i thought i'd never find another story like it... much love to you. best regards, darkbroney666


-side note for those wondering... a dragons requiem was taken down over a year ago so sadly you cannot read it as i have so be thankful of this amazing writer for this is likely the closest thing to a dragons requiem that you will get. also sorry to the writer of this story as this might sound like i'm promoteing a dragons requiem but it will live on in my heart and your story shall live on along side it.

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Lol....thank you for the comment, I know it's just a title, and the only requiem title I didn't like was a movie known as AVP Requiem....other than that your ok....thanks for the comment man.

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If you ever think of making a sequel, it'd be great to see Spike get into plenty of shenanigans with his wives and children, maybe even facing new enemies and taking in even more wives!

This is only a suggestion from me. It's up to you to decide what else to do with this story. I enjoyed reading it throughout.

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There originally was going to be a planned single, but the soundtrack we were going to used was going to be put for a Sequel of a different story, and we couldn't find any song replacements it may be scrapped for now, but if we're ever able to bring it back....we can

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I'm sure there's some music out there you can use as the soundtrack for the sequel. Even then, you're not obligated to find music for it. All you need is a compelling plot, which is good enough for me.

The Shadow being walked out of Rarity's Boutique, and into the night.

Whelp fancys dead.

"VEEEEENNNNGEEEEEAAAAANNNNCCCCEEEEE!!!!!!!!!" The creature screamed, while squeezing the trigger, as hard as it could. The boom of a powerful gunshot rang, as a demon bullet clattered the ground, while Fang's head exploded everywhere in a mess of blood, and brain fluid which stained the ground. The shadow Demon let out more rage filled scream's, as it fired it's shotgun's into the snake's body, until exploding out of the snake's coil's, while pieces of shredded snake, and blood exploded everywhere.

Well that escalated quickly.

Spike was in his new Kingdom....and was rather happy. Prince Blueblood had helped him build it, allowing him to have his rule with the help of some of the other's who were follower's of The Dragonbourne. When Spike returned back to Ponyville, Twilight Sparkle had welcomed him with open arm's. Everpony eventually learned about Spike being The Drargonbourne, and were at first shocked, and were about to say stuff of hatred.... but eventually cooled down. After Spike had taken the Nightmare Queen's to Luna, Celestia, and Cadence who helped sign a peace treaty between them for them to have their new kingdom in Equestria.

Why the hell would they sprout "stuff of hatred" on him!?

Spike has to do his destiny, and he did SAVE all their asses from the evil demon dragon clan.

P.S. I'm surprised that Celestia or especially Luna aren't weirded out, or react negatively to see their own dark nightmare versions of themselves right in front of them!?

( Luna = Nightmare Moon. Celestia = Daybreaker. )

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