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It a beautiful day outside bird are singing flowers are blooming on days like this kids like you... Should be burning in hell
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ah yeah
Here's a suggestion make sure that you have rough drafts of big events and have chapters deadly up to the big event that should help to think about what to write you can also have things that have no reason there just to be there.
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Thanks for the suggestion I'm still getting use to the fact someone likes what I wrote
amazing :>
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Thanks! Expect the next chapter soon :)
Pacing was bit scuffed; i mean not like back fort kind of way but a bit confusing and maybe a bit rushed. Also i would ask to please provide a sort of translation for gaster either a small bracket (). Add maybe a bit more details to the creations on how the gaster creations are made or the details.
Also i am making assumptions but by my guess the someone or something betrayed him and sealed him back to the abyss, of which i have to commend, that is nicely done.
This is an awesome story please do more
Its good but it felt very rushed
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Thanks for the feedback! Also I thought about doing something like that and I’ll try it the next chapter, and yes I was a bit rushed with the wait time on publishing new chapters I didn’t want to make anyone wait to long, I see now that rushed material isn’t always the best, so it’ll be a bit longer of a wait for the next chapter, also I left the creations vague on purpose, you’ll all see why in later chapters! Thanks again!
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Thanks glad your enjoying it!
Hey I hope you continue this it was good not a whole lot of gaster fanfic out there even fewer that actually seem good keep up the good work
YOU NOW FUCKED UP!!!!!
Pink... oh shit FEAR
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Ding ding ding!
Uh oh he is going to commit genocide to the Caribou for being a future threat to his little girls, he will not let that happen because he is back to keep his precious girls safe from harm
And also he has created the changeling and the bat pony's ancestors so that make him the father of their race yikes
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👎︎✌︎☼︎😐︎
👎︎✌︎☼︎😐︎☜︎☼︎
✡︎☜︎❄︎ 👎︎✌︎☼︎😐︎☜︎☼︎
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🏱︎☟︎⚐︎❄︎⚐︎☠︎ ☼︎☜︎✌︎👎︎✋︎☠︎☝︎💧︎ ☠︎☜︎☝︎✌︎❄︎✋︎✞︎☜︎
❄︎☟︎✋︎💧︎ ☠︎☜︎✠︎❄︎ ☜︎✠︎🏱︎☜︎☼︎✋︎💣︎☜︎☠︎❄︎
💧︎☜︎☜︎💣︎💧︎
✞︎☜︎☼︎✡︎
✞︎☜︎☼︎✡︎
✋︎☠︎❄︎☜︎☼︎☜︎💧︎❄︎✋︎☠︎☝︎
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🕈︎☟︎✌︎❄︎ 👎︎⚐︎ ✡︎⚐︎🕆︎ ❄︎🕈︎⚐︎ ❄︎☟︎✋︎☠︎😐︎
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✌︎ ☝︎⚐︎⚐︎👎︎ ☟︎✋︎💧︎❄︎⚐︎☼︎✋︎👍︎✌︎☹︎ 💣︎⚐︎💣︎☜︎☠︎❄︎ ✋︎☠︎ ☟︎✋︎💧︎ ☟︎✋︎💧︎ 🏱︎✌︎💧︎❄︎📪︎ ✌︎☠︎👎︎ ✌︎☹︎💧︎⚐︎ ✡︎⚐︎🕆︎ ☟︎✌︎✞︎☜︎ ☺︎🕆︎💧︎❄︎ ☝︎🕆︎☜︎💧︎💧︎☜︎👎︎ 🕈︎☟︎✌︎❄︎ ❄︎☟︎☜︎ 💣︎✌︎☺︎⚐︎☼︎ ☜︎✞︎☜︎☠︎❄︎ 🕈︎✌︎💧︎ ❄︎☟︎✌︎❄︎ 👍︎✌︎🕆︎💧︎☜︎👎︎ ☟︎✋︎💧︎ 🕆︎☹︎❄︎✋︎💣︎✌︎❄︎☜︎ 👎︎⚐︎🕈︎☠︎☞︎✌︎☹︎☹︎ ✋︎☠︎ ❄︎☟︎☜︎ ☜︎✡︎☜︎💧︎ ⚐︎☞︎ ☞︎✌︎🕆︎💧︎❄︎ ✌︎☠︎👎︎ ☟︎☜︎☼︎ 👎︎✌︎🕆︎☝︎☟︎❄︎☜︎☼︎💧︎
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Yep make you wonder what else he might have spawned in the world right.
⚐♒ ■□ ⧫♒♋⧫’⬧ ■□⧫ ♑□□♎ ⬥♏●◻ ❄♓❍♏ ♐□❒ □■♏ ⧫♓❍♏ ♎♏♋⧫♒ ♋■♎ ⬧●♋◆♑♒⧫♏❒
✌●⬧□ ✋ ❒♏♋●●⍓ ●♓&♏ ⧫♒♏ ⬧⧫□❒⍓ ⬧□ ♐♋❒ ✋ j◆⬧⧫ ♐□◆■♎ ♓⧫ ⧫□♎♋⍓ ♌◆⧫ ✋’❍ ♑□■■♋ ⬧⧫♓♍& ♋❒□◆■♎ ⬧□ ✋’❍ ♏⌧♍♓⧫♏♎ ♐□❒ ❍□❒♏ ⧫□ ❑◆□⧫♏ ⧫♒♏ ●♋⧫♏ ☜❍◻♏❒□❒ ◻♋●◻⍓ ✋ ⬧♒♋●● ⬥♋⧫♍♒ ⍓□◆❒ ♍♋❒♏♏❒ ⬥♓⧫♒ ♑❒♏♋⧫ ♓■⧫♏❒♏⬧⧫
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Thanks! Also I think it’s safe to say that the time for unlimited power is upon us when the slaughter arrives
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❄♒♏⍓ ♋❒♏ ❒♋♑♏📪 ♌❒◆⧫♋●📪 ⬥♓⧫♒□◆⧫ ❍♏❒♍⍓📬 👌◆⧫ ⍓□◆📬 ✡□◆ ⬥♓●● ♌♏ ⬥□❒⬧♏📬 ☼♓◻ ♋■♎ ⧫♏♋❒📪 ◆■⧫♓● ♓⧫ ♓⬧ ♎□■♏📬
Yell yeah dude keep up the great work on this story
I guess he can say that he was born in the Darkness you merely adopted the dark
11005292
Haha noice!
So you have chosen death
How does someone "speak in hands"?
Oh my the Caribou are completely and totally and utterly fucked I don’t mean in the way that they would appreciate
11005371
People often think about sign language from the phrase "Speak in Hands."
11005371
Sign language
Or in gasters case windings
11005371
He "speaks" in wingdings
Oh f*** here we go the Caribou is gonna get it now
I have never heard anyone describe a long chapter as "Dumby thick", take my like you filthy animal.
I usually don't like stories that have the Carribou in them, but I like this story so far and hope that when Gaster gets his hands on Faust that he can use his Save and Load ability to clean her up and make her pure again.
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I hopefully believe he could if it's not too late
I'm actually shocked that she's alive, most authors would use the death of family as motivation to start conflict. But now the question is "Why?"
Did Mothra plant false memories into the changlings to protect the moth ponies? Or was there another reason? Can't wait to find out!
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Yes that’s true, but with how the chapters are written it sounds like the story will have the form of a familie member being kidnapt and them then rescuing them. Here by gets Gaster the chance to show that he isn’t that bad and returns the loved ones back to equestria and earning his place back and not be seen as a evil monster.
I bet its king sombra that captured the moth pony's
ps: The Void calls for us
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Ohh interesting theory, why would he do you think he’d do that?
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the love of the moths may have powered the crystal heart. Ether that or it just a gut feeling.
The Void Walker is here
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Hmm not a bad theory. You’ll have to wait and find out
Not gonna lie, I really like this fic, but this chapter in particular made me facepalm so god damn hard. All the slave and slut stuff I couldn’t take seriously and just saw it as really stupid, but regardless, they do make a pretty nice target to beat up. So I do be looking forward to that
More and more bout the monsters to be revealed. Can’t wait to see what you cookin up
This is a fun story. Never played undertail but understand a few things. I do hope to see more very soon!
Did he get sent to the void ?
11024900
Yes he did
Can't wait for the next chapter keep up the good work
11026432
Thanks! It’s always nice to get words of encouragement!
11026876
Np I really enjoyed reading good stories like these especially since they help give me inspiration for my stories
Tyranny?