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Predator2525


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"DO IT INSIDE PLEASE, IT'S GOOD FOR THE BABY, YEEEEEESSSSSSS"

This is probably the greatest line ever written in the history of literature. Bravo.

Comment posted by Path_of_cloud deleted Feb 19th, 2020
Comment posted by Predator2525 deleted Dec 28th, 2019

that art cover is a joke... at least do it properly and its pita samas art

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I tried to have it in the pic correctly, but for some reason it was being very stupid I'll try to make it work next time, but no promises

I've spotted some spelling errors that need to be fixed. But all-in-all, good work

again, minor grammar mistakes in this chapter, but I do love a Sparity fic

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I am going to edit this entire Series when I get the chance, right now I have been busy with writing another series, that I will also edit before I post it I do also love your stories as well Israel Yabuki

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Like I said, I'm going to edit this entire Series when I get the chance, It may take me a while to get to it, but I will eventually

oh-ho, Bowser and Princess Peach, eh? Now that's kinky

I have now read this story and I have to say that I liked it. The only problem I have is that Rarity yells way to much. She's usually pretty composed unless she looses her temper and even then she doesn't always yell that much. Please respond to this comment.

Comment posted by Predator2525 deleted January 30th

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Yeah, I kind of see what you mean, technically the reason she was yelling near the beginning of the story, because she was fed up with the rumors of her, and Spike. Though, at least for the other part's that might be mistaken as clop part's I eventually got better with those.

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