Brilliant!! Fucking brilliant. I love how you write fucked-up grimdark, and I curse you for leaving me on such a cliffhanger.

When will chapter 8 be out?

Have Tia be tortured 10 fold!

I love you sir. You are an absolute god of alternative fimfics... I just cannot believe you. It is too good to be true. You are exactly how I want to be. With the fucking off the wall shit and the insane Trixie and murdered Twilight and just... everything. Perfection. You are GOD!

Don't you just love "Celestia is an Evil Tyrant and no, I'm not trying to do the concept in a logical manner that makes sense" fics? (Not that there is a way to do any of those stories logically)

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You disgust me.

The stuff with Trixie and Luna when AJ wants to kill Trixie really shines a light on the problem of how characters tend to act in this fic, going to extremes and then trying to brush under the rug how amoral they are, lashing out when called out. It could've really used a bit of smoothing out, at least with the sorts of "faces" the ponies wear socially about what each they do.

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i'd love to read something more like taming of the guards, that was hot x3