Trixie is awaiting execution for the attempted murder of Princess Celestia.
NO.
Luna and Trixie hook up, Trixie is Pregnant. Celestia is evil and castrates her guards. celestia kills pinkie. and everyone is friends at the end
Technically, your writing is decent, if not pretty good.
Story-wise...
Honestly, this was a pretty decent story. Too bad it got bombed by the TWE... Please don't take it down.
NO.
Luna and Trixie hook up, Trixie is Pregnant. Celestia is evil and castrates her guards. celestia kills pinkie. and everyone is friends at the end
Technically, your writing is decent, if not pretty good.
Story-wise...
Honestly, this was a pretty decent story. Too bad it got bombed by the TWE... Please don't take it down.