It's always so depressing when you see stories like this with that one lone thumbs up. You know it's the author going "this is my story and I'm proud of it!" and then there's a dozen or so other people going "no, this is terrible. Your story is an awful irredeemable mess and there's nothing good about it."
Makes you feel kinda sad.
Oh well. The story IS an awful, irredeemable mess, but I'll give it a thumbs up for exceeding my non-existent expectations and not devolving into your bog-standard Trixie gets tortured fic. That actually ligitametly surprised me.
This chapter is rather awkward, especially with Luna's emphasis on cruelty. Surely, cutting of Twilight's head and forcing Twilight's younger brother to mail it directly to Celestia would rank among cruelty, and Luna would know about it. Luna should thus really be making it clear that Trixie has to change for their alliance to work long-term.
No.Burn in hell man.
Well that escalated quickly.
Other than that, no comment. :/
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>MFW I read the comments.
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*Exits thread, intelligence still intact*
All my Wat.
It's always so depressing when you see stories like this with that one lone thumbs up. You know it's the author going "this is my story and I'm proud of it!" and then there's a dozen or so other people going "no, this is terrible. Your story is an awful irredeemable mess and there's nothing good about it."
Makes you feel kinda sad.
Oh well. The story IS an awful, irredeemable mess, but I'll give it a thumbs up for exceeding my non-existent expectations and not devolving into your bog-standard Trixie gets tortured fic. That actually ligitametly surprised me.
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nice.....nice
This chapter is rather awkward, especially with Luna's emphasis on cruelty. Surely, cutting of Twilight's head and forcing Twilight's younger brother to mail it directly to Celestia would rank among cruelty, and Luna would know about it. Luna should thus really be making it clear that Trixie has to change for their alliance to work long-term.