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Dragontamer99


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In the dark of the early morning, before the sunlight poured over the horizon, there was a little boy that sat alone, abandoned at an orphanage by his parents who could no longer afford to feed him or take care of him, let alone give him any kind of a future. In the cold, damp morning the boy’s father had his heartbroken wife. And since that happened, the boy has been left an orphanage that never cared for him. Now he uses TV store for his use of survival. But after wishing upon a Star. He's somewhere new


Thanks to the help of a new edit their that is amazing and helped me a whole bunch during the story go check him out. His name xXSaltfishXx

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 16 )

If any of you want to help my spelling issues please let me know or if you have any friends that could help me let me know I'm pretty busy person so usually don't have time to correct myself

This is pretty sad 😥.But its interesting to read.

I hope this story will be finish and have a good plot half of the story post on the site are just p**n euh

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We will see I'll see what direction I will take here and yes I know your pain

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You can get semone from the community to fix the grammatical errors also is the child Christian because he does say a lot the word god or lord

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He's a little bit of Christian yes

Punctuation is your friend.

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Punctuation killed my parents and ate my dog.

10296911 Punctuation fucked my mom and never called her back.

Oh geez, that's a lotta walltext.

VERY NICE! THE IMPROVEMENTS ARE GREAT! Keep going the story's getting interesting.

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It's going to be a little while the person that edits my stuff is in college or doing something and I have to wait for him to finish the next chapter which they'll really long chapter and spend taking a really long time because he's been doing his own school stuff I've been trying to find anedited that would help me the same way as you would but it's been difficult find someone like he did was so this story is going to be on a hold for a while there are going to be more I'm just going to have to put a huge message saying this stuff

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