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Not quite
This, this is what we call a cliffhanger!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA I NEED MORE
Oh no, please don't let anything too awful happen to or in Equestria! I want a happy ending!
This Is so... unexpected...
...
THE BROTHERHOOD APPROVES
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you just couldn't let Cooper be happy could you,
I hope it's somehow a pony holding a gun up to him, because if humans have a group violently set up in Equestria I'm gonna be disappointed. Also hopefully no other ponies went in to look for Twilight and hopefully it was just a 'few minutes'.
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You sonnuvva...
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In the first part on the chapter, I thought something would stop them from getting accross the portal, what with the "Just one minute" and all that. A lot can happen in just one minute.
Then they went throught, and I thought it would then be about landing somewhere else, maybe another universe better or worst than this one.
Then I thought that hey, maybe it will now be about coping about all that happened for both Twilight and Copper. Something him more than fine with. That's an interesting premise, I find, and an interesting subject.
And then this cliffhanger.
Now, I'm not sure what the "Four years" Twilight talk about refer to (Is it time enlapsed in Equestria ? The time since the end of the world in the cold world ?). Nor am I sure about that gun cocking noise origin. Did others came in the portal in the meantime ? That would make sense, after all.
All I can say is that I want to see what's next. And that I do hope we'll have a... not so unhappy ending
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There's a story about Rainbow Dash ending up in the universe of Mad Max, and I thought for a moment that the story was gonna follow that path. I can't remember the title of that story to refer directly to it.
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The 4 years is in reference to earlier in the story when Cooper told Twilight he hadn't seen the sun in over 4 years. Aside from that, I'm glad you liked the story. I hope you liked what I have planned. I spent a solid week trying to figure out what to do with the story but I'm happy with where it's going now.
I just want them to have a happy ending already. It hurts with every cliffhanger.
Edit: Another good song to pair this chapter with is The Walking Dead Game OST-02 Alive Inside. Always tugged at my heart strings, and man did this chapter remind me of a certain scene.
Ahaha! Progress! yet we still don't know if spike is on the wrong side of the portal so 1/50 is still in play, hopefully not tho.
In hindsight it seems wrong to have dismissed that someone else (maybe multiple someones) could have found the portal first.
of course it wouldn't be that easy
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You know what, that music is actually way better than what I found. I'll put that song in the authors note.
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Nothing's ever that easy ;)
We'll have to see what happens though. Hell I'm still not even sure what I'm gonna do next.
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Who says its a pony? Could be Spike.
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Oh, I feel honored to have contributed to the story! Thank you for including it.
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No, thank you for the music suggestion. It sounds fantastic :D
Something tells me that's not Twilight.
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oooooh, okie,
yep i kind of knew this was to good to be real.
amazing chapter grate cliffhanger.
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kek, I'm gonna laugh my ass off if it turns out to be spike holding the gun
10644859
Alright, thanks for clarifying ! I wasn't that far off the mark !
Well. Here we go again.
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lol, I told you the four years should have been clarified. The chapter was right on and, like everypony else, I look forward to what is gonna happen next.
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Eh, I figured more people would remember that from the previous chapters. Oh well, you win some, you lose some lol
Bruh. That cliff hanger though. Jesus Christ.
God...dammit...gabe...
New chapter soon?
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Well first off, let me say that it's a huge honor to have you reading one of my stories and enjoying it so much! I've been a big fan of your stories(particularly Shadow Me) and artwork for quite some time, so I'm honestly ecstatic to see that you like what I've written :D
Due to a whole slew of things going on lately, the next chapter is taking quite some time to finish, but at this point, I'm just waiting on my editor to go over it. As soon as he reads it and approves, then I'll upload it. My goal is to have it live within the next couple days.
10686587
Aww thank you!
i myself have been swamped with commission work so all my writing has been pell mell at best. Trying to get more written, but its slow going.
no worries. I look forward to more from ya ^^
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Understandable. Again, thank you so much for reading my story! I can't overstate how much I appreciate it. I do hope you'll try my other stories. Granted my first work is kind of rough in some areas, but I think you might enjoy them as well :)
You're one of the writers that inspired me to start writing myself a few years ago, so it would really mean a lot to hear what you think of the rest of my work <3
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Well ill have to take a look see then!
you've helped inspire me too. I kinda wanna write my own "dimensions equestria" story as i call em.
i like how you're not rushing their bond. keep at it. I wanna see what he thinks of Equestria. ^^
and maaaaybe what luna and tia think of him. XD
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That's extremely humbling to hear. Thank you so much :D
I so often find inspiration in others, that sometimes I forget that on occasion, someone might be inspired by me. That's incredibly flattering of you to say <3
I've been doing my best to ensure that their relationship develops as steadily and realistically as possible, so it's fantastic to hear that you think I'm doing a good job of it.
Oh come on I just find a great story and it ends on this huge ass cliffhanger. I better see the next chapter soon bud
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I know the next chapter has been taking forever :(
I've just had a very hard time writing it. That plus school, work, and the last week of cold weather in Texas knocking out my power has made it hard to get it done :(
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Ah yea online school sucks so I can’t blame ya for that. Still that was one mighty big cliffhanger
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Worry not friend. I think I will be uploading the next chapter tomorrow.
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Hot damm that’s extremely lucky since the story is still on my mind. Normally I have to reread a good chunk of the story to get back up to speed so normally I just wait until a ton of chapters come out but if it is that soon I won’t have to
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:D
It's nice when things work out like that
There you are Gabe