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IL take option h thanks, all of the above.
"I think you will all like what I have in mind for the next few." Why does that sound so ominous?
10392341
da fuq does LFBFPDEL mean?
10393613
Nothing, just random guesses at the themes of what tragic moment happened in Cooper's past.
It isn't meant to be an acronym.
Just guesses at what the thing that Cooper "doesn't want to talk about."
10393937
ohh okey, gotcha, :)
Hey man I'm really thankful for this story its fun to stew on. And I'm enjoying the character. Please remember that all fanfic need to be for the writer first. If you think you have expended the muse that inspired the story please dont let itdrown you. Keep in mind that if your no longer feeling motivated a remember that this ark has already had a climax and it's ok to end stories after climaxes. The one thing no one wants is to lose vision and for that story to end up in hiatus hell. I'm not telling you to give up just make sure your having fun.
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I appreciate that a lot. Thank you. Not to worry though, when I said I didn't know where to go after the last chapter, I meant more as in a "literally where do they go to get to the next part of the story" kind of way. I do have a full vision for this story, and I fully intend to finish it. I've purposely kept chapters around the 2000 word mark specifically so that I don't have to write all too much if I'm having a hard time with a chapter. Trust me, I hate when I find a good story and then find that the author went to Hiatus hell. I would never do that to anyone who reads and enjoys my work.
I can honestly say that unless something life-ending happens, I'll finish this story.
I am loving the bonding between the two. And again with the cliff hanger, nice, good storytelling device. As for said cliffhanger, Is this going to be 'they get picked up by a group of people and then become part of this group for a while'? I'd be interested in more characters for you to be able to kill off, but at the same time, I like the idea of this whole story just being Twilight and Cooper, to work at that sort of seclusion you know?
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Probably just end up getting shit on again. Seems to be the theme... hopefully I am wrong. It be nicer to see them get a bit of reprieve after all the crap they have been through.
This is a really well put together story and I can’t wait to see how the characters will develop
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Thanks so much :D
I think you'll be very happy with the way I have this story planned to go ;)
The story is certainly really nice. I'm enjoying this realistic portrayal of the post-apocalyptic times and I especially enjoy the characters. Being tense all the time takes a toll, and it can be seen in Cooper. The survival of people is portrayed realistically as well. In these harsh times, it is nigh-impossible to trust anyone. However, we are good at survival because we cooperate. There were the two friends or brothers that were killed and now there's an entire group. People do still stick together and cooperate despite everything. Chances are, those people were also close before the apocalypse. I wonder why Cooper is all alone.
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Only one way to find out ;)
The next chapter should be out tomorrow, so maybe we'll find out then.
I wonder... When Twilight got shot initially, she used a healing spell to close the wound. Is she too exhausted to perform that particular spell on Cooper or does her magic not work on him like that? Or did you forget that little detail and were stuck with mending wounds the traditional way?
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Twilight is trying to conserve her magic as much as she can. She's basically malnourished and dying when Cooper finds her. At this point, it's only been a week or so, so she's not quite strong with her magic yet. I mean, just a few days before this, she passed out after teleporting. She simply doesn't have enough magic strength to cast that spell anymore at this point in the story.
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Hmm, guess that makes sense. I figured since she didn't need to use her magic to survive for the past week or so after they found shelter in that supermarket, she and/or her magic would've recovered enough for such a mending spell.
Then again, Cooper did say she is hurt more in this chapter than when she teleported them both. Guess that should've been a clue that her magic still is not up to snuff yet.
Hmmm....I know I'll learn soon but I'm wondering if this is the remenemts of government forces.
Would be interesting if they run into some people from the government.
Gotta be bunkers somewhere.
I can't help but notice that this story needs a lot more polish. The premise is fine, and the majority of the issues are in the spelling department. There are several words that you consistently misspell. Peaked for peeked, Feint for faint, and several others.
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I'd have to go back and redo all of the spelling issues you're referring to on a document where I can highlight a specific word and find it just by searching for that one word. I write on fimfiction, so I don't really have that and I definitely don't have the time to edit this story anymore. What with the commissions I have to do, school, and the next story I'm writing that's about 3 times as long as this one.