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Shame they couldn't do anything to at least try to see if they could escape with any of the survivors of the camp. Still I get exactly what he's talking about. In a situation like that (especially in their injured and weakened state), there is really not much they could do. Hopefully, maybe possibly they might work with other survivor's in escaping the carnage going on. I mean... it may even turn out and work out for them. Also how much time has passed in all this? I am interested in knowing what could possibly be going on back on Twilights world. Or is this story more focused on whats happening here?
It's gonna be a big problem if Gabe manages to survive and convince the other survivors that it was Cooper and Twilight's fault.
I'm getting a bioshock infinite feeling from this (twilight = Elizabeth) (Cooper = Booker). Which is pretty cool tbh. They just synch together so well.
leaving Gabe alive was probably a bad move though I think twilight would've been against future problem prevention via gunshot.
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Anything's possible. As for the time passing, we're just focusing on Earth for now ;)
I can tell this probably won’t be the last we hear from Gabe. I am definitely in favor of him being a recurring antagonist.
Did gabe forget to have guards?
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Hmmm pretty good and interesting so far. I do hope to see more soon!
Those chapters are so short, yet so good and satisfying. Almost like those damn halloween candies. You take one, and a blink of an eye later you wonder where the whole package went ! Please keep going !
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Thank you :D
I expect the next chapter should go up sometime next week. Maybe by Wednesday.
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I'll be on the lookout then
Great update!
Well okay then, General Zod.
I feel bad for Gabe from what was shown he seemed to be genuine in his attempts to rebuild and to watch as your hard work is destroyed and the people you tried to protect killed...
Ok so decent story but after chap 17 ? Absolutely dog water my g. Ok maybe not that bad but I personally think you need more twilight and Cooper interactions and way less "everytime they get a Lil breathing room shit turns south" cause that gets boring after pretty damn fast when it's like what ? 4 or 5th time by this point. Personally I think that cooper's introduction and the raiders at the settlement were the only scenes needed where shit hits the fan.
No need for it to be "gritty" survival of the fittest in a harsh environment, cool in a game but to read it is just formulaic imo you don't need shit to hut the fan constantly to make it a harsh survival.