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Well I kinda was figuring he has lost someone earlier on. The tidbits of it was pretty evident as I read through the story. Sad it was his daughter, but I can see how he may see his kid in Twilight. A young female (albeit pony in this instance) whom has never really seen true horror and violence in her lifetime would kinda come off as a child if you think about it. Now lets just hope she doesn't get caught. I have a feeling that women whom Cooper talked with eariler about working the furnace may just pop back in. Though that's just my take on it.
I think the chapter ended somewhat abruptly and didn't really have time to pull me in. It's as long as the chapters before, but for some reason, it feels incomplete.
A good bit of stuff to get to other stuff. Filler that didn't feel like filler. You're doing really well, especially in this chapter, just some quality writing.
As a side note, this story is really sad in a way. A look into the end times. A nuclear winter like this isn't survivable, all of these people are going to die along with all other large animal species. It's nice to see them trying though.
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What you're saying is true, I definitely agree. I however have no problem with the length of the chapters because we are reading it as it's being published. Anyone who reads once it's done isn't going to have that problem. I'd suggest waiting until two chapters are out before reading if you noticed one of them is short.
Misplaced apostrophe in the word humans.
Yo i love boss guy hes got a good sence of flair ^.^ its that one guy who keeps adding friend to the end of his sentences thats freaking me out
Damn. Looks like I was right about him having lost someone close to him, but I thought it was going to be his girlfriend/wife or maybe his sister. But not his daughter. Sad thing is, that implies her mother is probably also dead. It's not been mentioned in the story (I think so, at least) but I think that has affected Cooper quite a bit, having lost not just one but two people very close to him. He essentially lost his whole family.
Looking forward to seeing Twilight's reaction to this little reveal.
Also
I think there should not be a period after her sentence and the "the" is supposed to be lower case.
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I agree with you friend.
Hah Called it.
Though glad they could finnaly link back up.
Hmm.....wonder how long till Twilight finds her way home.....and how much will be left of the mare who walked through the portal.
Can't help pictir9ng her being bigger when she returns do to aging up while it's only been like 30 minutes for her home but years for her.
I originally thought he lost a brother then when he first said she was so much like twilight I assumed a sister I’m glad he’s opening up to twilight tough hopefully she can help him cope and show more of his emotions
Ha HA
No dick for you!
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I'm sincerely hoping that the successor isn't Kyle or his buddy.