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Shit hits the fan in the next chapter, those two will regret coming to that market
Not really. I expected something to go wrongl soon, since it ran very smoethly for themfor quite some time.
heals one leg the other gets fucked also if that was a broad head that wounds going to suck
Hey man good work on these chapters I like the story keep up the great work
10352996
>:D
10353857
Thank you. I really appreciate that <3
This story really reminds me of this.
Not really to both. I like the whole desolation of the land. It's possible that the man who shot her is surprised she can talk and holds off his attack only to get murdered by cooper, or maybe cooper just comes in and saves the day. Blah blah blah. Either way I expect a big sad to come out of the next chapter. Also a good display of Twi's nature in here, her begging cooper not to kill without super thinking of any better idea.
Either the men leaving was a ruse of them and they somehow knew (maybe they did see Twilight flying outside?) Twilight and Cooper were in there, or they came back, maybe to get some more food.
Either way, things don't look to pretty right now...
As a side note, can you put the links to the chapter theme at the start of the chapter? I find the placement at the end of the chapter a bit inconvenient because I have to either listen to the theme after I'm done reading and reached the end naturally, or I have to scroll all the way down and risk inadvertently getting a sort-of spoiler (like it happened in this chapter to me). I'd like to have the theme playing while I read the chapter, so this is a bit suboptimal for in my opinion.
10419802
I'll adjust in future chapters :)
10419857
Cool, thanks
In a post apocalyptic wasteland?
No....not at all.
10419802
I totally agree, it's annoying as heck, I am thinking that it must be a formatting issue with Fimfiction, because I see this quite frequently in a lot of stories.