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Wuff. That... that sucks. For both you and Cooper. Part of me is thinking oh, this amount of time was enough to injure Sparkle's mental health, but not enough time to begin to warp her values around living in the wasteland. It was a trial of hardship rather than a cultural adjustment. Maybe that's only me, but I find that when a person (pony or otherwise) acclimates to a system, culture, or otherwise, then gets sent back, makes for a more interesting story. But I understand that writing is hard. Sometimes getting something out there is better than letting the ending fester. Good luck on your future works!
Cue the Lion King sad music at the end (first two minutes of it). Sad to see it end like this but dang, it was a great story! Thank you for writing this piece.
Noooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!
How you going to do me like this my mans.
πππ’π₯πππππππ Thank you for your hard work.!
the plan..... was, for Cooper too die this entire time??? you monster,
*hug* I hope you feel better soon, and thank you for this amazing story.
Thank you for your hard work, It was a beatifull and sad history, i love it!
Damn. This is sad cooper finally got to have a chance at a semi-normal life only for it to be taken away by a mad man. Iβm sad to see this is how it ends but at las canβt always have a happy ending. I do hope ya give us a sequel that has a good-feel to it maybe find some stupid way to bring cooper back :P but anyways amazing story and Iβm glad I got to see it through!
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if there not some kind of dexemokina i sware to fuck
It bloody hurts that of course, Cooper didn't make it but Holy shit was Gabe annihilated!
Thank you mate, for writing this story Its been awesome!
I feel a bit bad for forgetting who Gabe was for most of that. Oh, but dude, seriously it's all good, at the end of the day, writing is supposed to be enjoyable for you first and other people second, I'm glad I got to enjoy it as much as I did; but if you are stressed/upset/whatever with the process, then I'd rather you not write. Everyone should be happy in the process. Or at least, that's just my two cents.
Also, ehem "Ooooooh nooooooo, heeee's DEEEEAD"
Either way, you still did great friend, I wish you well.
Nooooooo he cant die before meeting the main 6!!!!!
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Ree,
Iβd rather you would have struggled through some ending where they survived instead of this. It feels forced and quickly written to get to some shoddy conclusion. Sorry but I wont be around for the epilogue. It was going good and then a train wreck of an ending. I know writers have trouble sometimes writing. Having a block or loss of interest in you work truly sucks. Sad to see this end in such way. Maybe you could have talked it out we could have helped you get you interest back. Oh well. In the end it is what it is.
It is funny how a sad ending can hammer the heart of a reader and touch them in places usually left alone by most writers. Particularly in fan fiction. A lot of people don't like being thrust into uncomfortable emotional events.
However, done well, it is hard to draw out genuine emotion with such strength as it often garners.
Happy endings are great, and well treasured, but this felt in line with things, if sharp in the arrival and denial of rest outside of death for Cooper.
Not every story ends with a smile, but every good story grabs the heart as it closes.
You did so.
So all that was just to build up to him dying at the end? real fuckin great ending.
A little sad about the abrupt ending, but you really did a great job with the story and its development. Thank you for your effort.
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it says incompleate its not ovr yet.
Wooo another update!!!
I cant wait read the next---
*reads the authors note*
---ah...
I suppose all stories must end at some point, and you have a good reason to do so. Great story, can't wait to see what ya cook up next ^^
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I know
When I saw you comment on the last chapter I felt so bad but I didn't want to give the ending away
If you think it's better to stop there, please don't beat yourself over it. It's better for a story to end on a high (or there, highly bittersweet) note than to keep going too long. And as it is, the ending seems fitting. Brutal, just as the rest of the story was. I like that
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Totally fine! I'll keep an eye out for more of your stories!!!
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Thank you. I can't tell you how much I appreciate your support :)
crap this sucks.
Well the story was quite fun to read honestly and I hope everything does end well in whatever you are going through thank you for creating this story and progressing to this very point even if the ending was a bit bittersweet many thanks
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I'm sorry that you feel that way. I know this is a pretty late response, but if you do decide to read the epilogue, I think you might change your mind slightly. I didn't want to end this story on a completely sad note, after all.
I actually was hoping for a sad one. If not just bittersweet. This fits the bill.
Great story the characters you made for this cooper especially where very entertaining to be with and the survival aspect was greatly done it reminded me a bit of a fallout 4 mod and S.T.A.L.K.E.R. Thanks for taking the time to finish this despite how hard it was to write.
Memorial Unknown
Cooper Slain Adrian
Mya Slain Martha
Sarah Slain
Gabe Sanchez
Kyle
If he's a man of God, then he ought to remember the ten commandments. One of which is: "Thou shalt not kill." Of course, Gabe isn't exactly in his right mind.
Well, I did not see that coming...
He'd better come back in the sequel
This was a very good book though, and while I do dislike the tragedy ending, it is well written.
Sorry, but I dont think I will be able to look at the epilogue until you do a sequel, I dont deal with tragic endings like this very well and unless I can see it through till things get better, it's best for my mental health to just stop and forget.
On a different note,
Keep up the good work! Now that this story is read it means I've read every major story you have here, and I can say they are all amazing. Every one I have felt close to the characters in (except the marines from No man left behind for some odd reason π€) , which is not something I think I can say for any other Author on this site I've read from so far. Especially The Discovery, I think that fic is a masterpiece that many authors should look at and learn from. Seriously, it's in my favorite category and I dont put just anything in there.
Good luck on whatever you decide to write next, I await news with eagerness
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Thank you :)
I'm really happy to hear that. If I might make a suggestion, I think you should read the epilogue of this story. Just trust me on that one. I do hope to see you in my future works, and thank you for saying that about the Discovery. That was my first attempt at writing and I'm really proud of how it turned out.
I like how Gabe, instead of exploring the castle, he just stayed at the portal room to wait for Cooper and Twilight to come through. Just shows how loco he had gone.
Here's hoping Cooper made it to Equestria's equivalent to Valhalla.
Pretty big plot hole imo, your telling me Gabe somehow survived the grenade,the bandits,slowly bleeding ou,the cold and didn't pass by the wolf and somehow stumbled upon the portal before Cooper and twi ? And also connected that the two were related ? Pretty contrived? Or leap of logic but ok pretty decent ending I suppose but the whole Gabe as a God thumper antagonist was pretty dumb and wasn't really set up.