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WildAce
My dream goal is to spend my life with Rainbow Dash.
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Never having heard of that game until now, I have to ask: Does it have anything to do with World of Warcraft?
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No, it is a game that involves warships it is from WarGaming. You can actually see this game in the following link: https://worldofwarships.com
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It is a really entertaining videogame which you can download for free.
...wut
This chapter feels really fast paced, it's hard to tell what's happening and who's point of view it's changing to.
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Wow, Thanks for the comment. I'll look into it. Thank you so much for the tips.
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By the way, what do you mean fast paced?
Enjoying the story so far bud, the grammar isn't that great but I understand what's going on. Keep up the good work.
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Thank you!! Is the grammar the most common mistake? (I actually have English as my second language, my first is Spanish, however I am a super fan of English and Latin.)
Yay.
You should put a disclaimer or something
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About...
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The porn
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Ohh.. Ok, I'll put it.
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I don’t think it needs a tag if it’s just a chapter I just think there should be a disclaimer at the start of the chapter
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Ohh...
Why did this story get canceled just wondering
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Well, I just think it was getting a bit to sexual, but I'll try to moderate it. Plus, I really love this story so I'll put it in hiatus and in a week tops, a new upload will be ready.
Can someone give me a summary so far on what has occurred. I have reread this entire story from the first to the current last chapter and now i am at a loss.
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I think the pacing was a bit fast for my taste. I mean you also lost me at the chapter 'the bad, the good and the ugly'. I mean i understood it on how he got back, though it took me a while.
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Ohhh. Thank you very much. I'll keep in mind in that chapter.
You mind if I do a linked story? Same universe, but different POV and location for the character initially (and most certainly, different love interest, lol).
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Sure. You're totally free. I would love to read it.
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Maybe we could link it, Idk. To have fun.
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Just a final thing, please, when you finish the first chapter tell me about it. I am eager to know what changes or what you created. It's an honor really to inspire people to write and to have their imaginations flow.
Will this story have any sex scenes, implied or otherwise, where the woman does most or all of the work? Also, are they only going to be between Rainbow Dash and Jorge?
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Well, I like it were the woman does all the work.
Idk if I will do it just between Rainbow and the main character. That, I will see with time. Although I like it to be just between the two of them. But idk. Maybe I'll take James's Love life.
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Yes, I will make it so all sex scenes are implied. Maybe one in 10 episodes will be pure clop.
One of the things about Rainbow is that she is daring. Why wouldn't she start most of the sex? Besides, ponies in this universe are way more sexually active than humans. So Rainbow has to start or Jorge won't do anything, maybe once a month, but not the frecuency Rainbow wants.
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On an escalator
It’s going upstairs
So see you later
Bye bye
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jajajajajaja see ya later! Have a nice weekend.
I will restart this story because I haven't liked how it progressed. Wait for the new one. It'll come next week.
Just saw the story under updates, I know that feeling of just needing to do the rewrite... just did it with one of my own stories.
If you need a proofreader or editor I can help you out
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Thank you very much I do need one. Though I don't have any resources or any of that to recompensate you for your hard work.
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It's okay, I write for the love of writing.
My speed will be random and sporadic but I have nine years experience writing on this site, so I'll be very thorough!
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Oh thank you very much!! I also do this because I love to write this stuff. Hired! jajajajajajaja What do I need to do for you to help me?
I cant wait for the rebooted version i really liked this story keep up the great work 👍🏻
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Thank you for the inspiring words. I'll do my best for it to be better. There where things that didn't go according to plan due to me not giving enough thought.
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Well the rewrite is up can't wait to see you over there!
The first sentence in the story description is about how pedestrian your taste in video games is. Of course you're ashamed of this.
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Yep, I thought about that, and it really was the worst move as I was pecking somethings from one videogame from another, thus making the story a bit rushed and not that great in terms of adventures and the fights.
This is deliciously meta and as long as it remains that way I will keep my comments as serious as I can given the circumstance.
If I were in his situation, I would have told my friend to her over there ASAP, given they seem to be on the same page and regardless of whether I knew what is going to happen, I wouldn't want to go alone.
Having 900 points from the get go feels gratuitous but at the same time he does need to be able to experiment so he knows what he's getting for the lives he's expending. There's got to be more nuisance to it than simply the summon appears in front of you and just exists, though it would be pretty funny if you could 'accidentally drop a battleship on your toe'. There's got to be a time limit for its existence and restrictions on armaments and advancement of tech. Or maybe the units are only as real as you believe them to be, so if you can't reconcile how it would be able to exist, it won't. Probably not something I would make a habit of using ever.
Becoming a brotherhood assassin while fun actually means a lot of work for you. You alone will die, it is that simple. The Templar threat lies not in their military prowess, but in their tendency to recruit from the upper echelons of society. Captains of industry, local magestraits, honorable Knights that sort of thing. Add to that that what they do is not technically illegal and there you go. The first thing I would do is ascertain the extent of the threat as it is now and make my plans around Celestia not knowing what I am going to do. Celestia is actually a high risk because what she wants and what the Templar want are effectively the same. I would enquire why she dislikes them and focus my efforts on becoming a close personal friend of her's and Luna's. The last thing I would be doing before the end of the day is aquireing a map of Canterlot and identifying the slums and ghettos. That is where practice and recruitment shall begin.