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The Crystal king
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The Crystal king
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Really good concept. I love the Assassin's Creed games and would love to read more. There are a few grammar mistakes, but overall well written. Hope you stick with it.
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Thank you for pointing out some of the grammar mistakes, I'll get right on it shortly and I do too, they are really fun
I can't wait to see what else the assassin does to the Idiot Caribou, of course I would LOVE to see him call in reinforcements to help save the ponies if he was able to.
Bashful headbutt? Bashful means shy, meek.
Putted is not a word.
I see a mistake.
WHAT ARE THOSE!!!!!!!!
8475012
Well, lets say he has a lot of work to do....
Uhh... an M4 pistol. Do you even know what an M4 is?! It is a military assault rifle. The pistol version is the same action without the stock and a shortened barrel. What should be there is the M9. Also known as the Beretta FS92, a 9mm handgun with a 15 round magazine.
8644634
Thank you for pointing that out
this is epic
8713824
This story is one of my finest so im glad you like it
Heh, thank you.
8477500
I KNOW
Do you want some help editing? If you do, PM me.
This story is kinda like a reverse direction of a hentai I watched once. Gotta admit though, this one is more satisfying. I love it when sick fuckers die; my heart beats and my adrenaline rushes, there is no better feeling.
8796652
Indeed, tis is a good feeling to see that those rapists die like the scum they are...
The perfect assassin/FoE combo is finally here. I've been looking for a satisfying assassin story in this universe. And you, sir, have gained my attention. I'll be looking forward to seeing what else Robert will do to cripple the damnable Caribou.
When are you gonna update, this story sounds badass
8796652
You and me both
That's an interesting twist. You don't often see bat ponies in a Fall of Equestria fic.
8974314
Yea I've notice that too, but that's why I added them.
Its put, not putted. Putted is a golf term. He is not playing golf, he is putting something on the ground. I recommend you stay clear of put and use place since you don't know when to use the right superlative of put
8974322
Dammit, I keep on forgetting about that!! Soo Sorry
Not bad. Have you been working on your spelling and grammar structure?
9275794
Yeah, I had a few suggestions here and there.
9404595
Soon my friend
I'm honestly hyped for the next chapter!
Keep up the good work.
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That sounds awesome. That is a great idea!!
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It Spanish
MOAR !!!
*poke*
I have to wonder. Will the Assassin be recruiting the Ponies he rescues or will he continue to go it alone?
Author if you are still there please give us a sign or something and if you are please continue this story please
9464666
So are you busy or something or what?
9464666
Hey you think you could give me some advice on a cover art like this.
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How did you draw that cover art?