“Hey girls, Rarity, just the person I was looking for,” said Flash as he walked into the room

“Oh, what can I do for you Flash?” she asked

“Spike forgot his phone, he left in my bag by mistake, so I wanted to put in his room, and I know you have the key,” said Rarity

“The fact that I know that Cheese and Pinkie are gonna be in the same bedroom tonight, and I saw Spike give you the keys before he left,” said Flash

“Fair enough,” said Rarity as she got up and accompanied Flash to Spike’s room

This entire segment makes no sense. Flash is suppose to be the one to tell that Spike forgot his phone and the explaination Flash gives is missing the question from Rarity.

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Shows how sleep deprived I am, thanks for pointing it out

Great story so far, hope to see more

Very interesting story so far I’m now sure why but I’m liking these spike stories lately…maybe cause it’s relatable, the first part of being invisible and shit not the second of actually being noticed eventually. Anyways loving it and hope to see more soon!

A question doesn't Spike seem to willing eager to kill and don't get me wrong this is still an interesting story I just find it weird oh that killing comes easy to spike is it where does it just me

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At this point of the story it is kill or be killed... plus, since Spike has been "training" with his father, he is picking up all of his father's skill and he was a warrior.

Fair enough I guess at this point of the story I mean at the beginning he had no problems killing then but still a good story

Man, they'd been holding that in for quite some time it would seem.

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