I like this story but he's to forgiving to someone who left him like trash and someone who made his life miserable for years. Makes you wonder if spike didn't have that power up after that fight would thay care?

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I respect your comment but I'd like to ask you something, let's say you suffered the same or even worse things than Spike, and one day you become stronger than your bullies, would you stoop down to their level and behave the same way they did or would you act in a forgiving way.

I know that many people read this fic waiting to see Spike go back to class and just torture the hell out of his bullies. But if there is something that life has taught me is that Guilt can kill.

Spike ain't nice because of the kindness in his heart, he knows that everyone in school is either afraid or feel seriously guilty about how they treated him, so he is torturing them in a more subtle, yet, evil way. By acting nice and even saying he is willing to die to save the lives of everyone friend or foe, he is psychologically stabbing everyone who bullied him. Believe me sometimes words can be deadlier than weapons.

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No I wouldn't stoop down to there level but I feel the feelings of the people that tortured spike should be brought up at some point more in depth. If you're planning to do this in future chapters sorry thanks for the reply. Ps keep on being you and have fun

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Fine Deleted I'm gone.

Looking at the cover art, I have to say: The artist got Overhaul's mask and eye color completely wrong. Everything else looks good, though!

‘Say Spike, don’t you think that all of what we went through made us closer, like friends?” asked Twilight

“Yeah,” Spike said

“So what do you say? Friends?” she said

“No,” Spike said

“But I thought,” Twilight said

“I agreed that it brought us closer, I didn't say that we were friends,” Spike said walking away “That doesn’t mean I’m not open to the idea of re-befriending you, sometime in the near future,” Spike finished as he continued walking to his bike.

Don't be sad Twilight, progress is progress.

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I understand the notion but only as far as the game is played, nobody likes getting outplayed. More often than not a knife or a fist is deadlier than a few sacreligious words. No one feels guilt, someone only regrets getting caught. That's a hard reality of life, kindness doesn't kill, it gives you a weakness to be exploited through.