Spike must learn to "Forgive and Forget," but his demons won't let him.
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You're pretty good with Spike as the main character you should do one where Spike becomes Darth Vader's apprentice with Starkiller
Feel a bit rushed and I'm sorry but major pissed.
You mentioned in the story AppleJack had been treating Spike badly like she hated him, and then doing this one eighty pisses me off as it makes no sense, and worst yet we hadn't even heard why she acted that way.
Not only is that bad writing but it'sfeels liek your trolling the reader or just forgotten and or don't care about it., but never fixed it.
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We'll get to that soon enough, and believe me, it WILL anger you
Remember, I left the ending of this chapter open
How many of you believe the hooded figure is Filthy Rich, or the Flim Flam Bros.? Both have plenty of motivation to want Sweet Apple Acres from the Apples...