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hmm, seems intresting. . Perhaps the story is moving ab too fast, but i guess i have to see how it goes. I will definetly track this. Another thing, maybe you should consider adding the human tag, as this apears to be a HIE sotry. Hope you have a nice day(or night) and i anticipate the next chapter.
P.S sorry if the grammar in this comment is bad, english is not my first language
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Oh yeah, thanks. I considered adding the human tag but wasn’t sure since he is turned into a pony, but I’ll add that now.
Keep it up. :)
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Thank you :D
Great chapter!
When is Rainbow Dash going to find out the truth?
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First I’m gonna try and get some chapters focusing on her in, then I’ll find a good moment to have that chapter like I did with Twilight and Spike. That’s a pretty key chapter so the moment that happens has to feel just right.
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Thanks!
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I should be thanking you for reading
Grammar 10/10 progression a little fast for my paste but it will do your OC character relatable overall great story 9/10 good job making this a great story!
Great chapter!
Is the ‘race” kind of like a metaphor for dating?
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Not exactly. It is just a flying race, but by now, Storm has realised that Rainbow will win wether he can fly or not. This is making him think wether the only reason she wants him to be able to fly is so she can brag over winning a race against him.
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I plan on slowing the progression down again pretty soon, I just wanted to make this learning to fly segment a little more unique by having a fight in the middle if that makes sense.
(Also this is the only chapter I haven’t proofread, so if the ending seemed rushed that would be why)
Great chapter!
Now Celestia and perhaps Luna now knows who Storm really is. How will that play out now that she or both herself and Luna knows?
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I do intend for the princesses to play quite a big part in the story, Luna more so than Celestia. I can’t really say how just yet, but they are both quite important characters.
Great chapter!
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Thanks :D
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You’re welcome!
Great chapter!
I like options 1 and 3, but you can be the tiebreaker if it comes to that!
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Luckily for me one of those is the one I already have a chapter planned for
And if it does come down to a tie, combining the two isn’t out of the question either.
Great chapter!
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Thanks
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You’re welcome!
Great chapter?
Are we going to find out Rainbow’s problem next chapter?
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Nope not yet.
I have something else planned for next chapter
Great chapter!
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Thanks :D
Great chapter!
Great chapter!
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Thanks :D
I am loving this story so far! Can't wait for more!
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I'm glad you're enjoying it
Great chapter!
Have what... if I may ask?
Is his sickness related to what Rainbow had or is it something else?
How long will he keep his secret from Rainbow?
Sorry for the questions,. I just need to let them out of me you know.
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She's referring to time. It means that he can have as much time as he needs.
As for your other two questions, your second one will be answered pretty soon. I was planning on Rainbow finding the truth around the chapter 30 mark, as I already have a scenario planned out.
Great chapter!
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Thanks :)
Sweet chapter!
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That's new
And thanks!
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you're welcome!
Great chapter!
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Thanks!
Great chapter!
This story will be a long one, right?
Pretty soon, storm is going to have to come clean about himself. I mean, he doesn't even know how to fly, so when his wings heal he's going to have a lot of explaining to do. Good story so far!
Go Beyond! PLUS ULTRA!
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Yeah, it will. I'm actually not sure whether to have the main story happen in this story, or end on a cliffhanger and have it in a sequel.
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As of right now, only 2 characters know the truth. There will be more pretty soon though
Great chapter!
Back, not bike.
Twilight on a bike with Spike E.T. Style. Amblin Entertainment.
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Ha thanks for pointing that out!
Man, this story is actually really good. Keep it up!
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I'm glad you're enjoying it so far :D