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Countless numbers of genocide runs have been committed, each of them no different from the last. Until suddenly, Sans remembers. He remembers it all. Every single timeline and every single genocide was clear as day in his head, and he was determined to put an end to it. But even then, he couldn't defeat the human. Even with the knowledge of every reset, Chara once again defeated him and successfully completed another genocide run, but something was different this time...

Instead of waking up in his bed at the beginning of another reset, he opened his eyes to a place he didn't recognise. A place that, sooner or later, would be under the same exact threat as his home world.

This time, Sans was ready for anything. This time, he'd be fighting until his last breath.


Custom Tags: Sans, Chara, Papyrus


- All music used belongs to their original creators.

- Undertale belongs to Toby Fox.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 70 )

Seriously, Chara ( Genocide Route Frisk ) !

Your gonna go after the poor Ponies and Equestria now??!! What did they, along with the other MLP Races ever do to you?????!!!!!!

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* The thought that the mouse will one day leave the hole and get the cheese fills you with determination

Interesting start. Gotta say, I really do like Sans' introduction with the mane six. It felt like him, but also held that solid feeling of uncertainty and struggling to keep smiling. You've got me hooked, and I look forward to the chapters yet to arrive.

*Knowing that you've got a place to weather out the storm filles you with DETERMINATION!*

Had Thoughts Of This Being An Undertale: Last Breath Story By The Description. But Definitely Not Disappointed Of The Outcome Either Way. Tracked.

This time, Sans was ready for anything. This time, he'd be fighting until his last breath.

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Thanks! I'm glad to know I didn't accidentally make him out of character :twilightsheepish:

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There is a lot of inspiration from Last Breath, but I still wanted it to be an original story. That's partly why I had the Sans fight happen in Snowdin this time rather than the Judgement Hall

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Which Also Reminds Me, The Fight Location Has A Undertale: Tears In The Rain Feel To It. Along With This Story Having An Improvised Undertale: Disbelief Papyrus Prologue, Since Sans Bit The Dust Early. But Probably Not What You Intended, So I'll Just Wait For The Next Chapter.

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I did actually intend for that to feel like Disbelief because Papyrus will have a chapter or two dedicated to him later on. Most of the Papyrus stuff I'm planning on writing will be pretty close to Disbelief up until the end, where I'm gonna change it up a bit

What will happen next tune in next time.

Hope the next chapter is soon! :trollestia:

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I'm serious. The description of the battles is amazing! But I'm Russian! I had to read in a crooked transletion!

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I'm glad you liked it! Sorry you had to translate it though :twilightsheepish:

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It should be soon. I'm trying to aim for 1 or 2 chapters a week depending on the length

cute and great

Hey this was really good hope to see more not a lot of undertale fanfic out there my favorite comic dub for undertale was the "Thought" comic dub

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I remember seeing that comic dub a few years ago. It was pretty good

Was honestly hoping Sans would've been a skeleton pony, thought that would be funny.

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I considered that, but it didn't seem right for some reason. I couldn't really see it fitting in, I guess is the right way to put it, since if he was a skeleton, it would've been obvious that he wasn't just some normal pony, and that mystery with Pinkie Pie knowing more about Sans than she should wouldn't really matter anymore

Hey you can say that the bunny is a guardian ANGEL

Hey it's good to have you back I like reading your story keep it up ok it's a good one so far👍

Ia that Gaster's doing?

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Thanks! I'll try to update again as soon as I can :)

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I'll be honest, I kinda lost interest in writing and started focusing more on art and Youtube, but I have a chapter that's about halfway written. Once I start finding writing fun again I should have it finished not long after

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I like the concept of a weapon that makes things it kills stay dead even if a reset happens, but I don't think I'd use it in this story since resets don't happen in Equestria and only affect the Undertale universe. It's definitely a cool idea though, I'd try making a story with it yourself and see how it turns out

Glad to have this story getting updates and enjoying every chapter.

yay new chapter! This was great.

lets goooo new chapter

Very glad to see this back! This was a great cheaper to return to. Hope the next chapter is soon! :pinkiesmile:

"En guard!" :yay:

At what point in the MLP timeline/series does this story take place?

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I don’t think it’ll affect the story much, but it can take place at any point before Discord reforms. The only thing I’ve changed from the official timeline is that Twilight is already an Alicorn at this point
Edit: Things might get mentioned later that give it a more specific point, like events from the show, etc

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Sounds cool, though I'm a bit worried about what Chara might do if she manages to make it into Equestria :twilightoops:

YO︎U︎ A︎R︎E︎ N︎O︎T︎ Y︎O︎U︎R︎ O︎W︎N︎ M︎A︎S︎T︎E︎R︎.︎

T︎H︎I︎S︎ H︎A︎S︎ A︎L︎L︎ B︎E︎E︎N︎ P︎R︎E︎D︎E︎T︎E︎R︎M︎I︎N︎E︎D︎.︎

D︎O︎ N︎O︎T︎ F︎E︎A︎R︎ T︎H︎E︎ D︎A︎R︎K︎,︎ H︎U︎M︎A︎N︎.︎

Y︎O︎U︎R︎ R︎O︎L︎E︎ S︎H︎A︎L︎L︎ S︎O︎O︎N︎ B︎E︎ F︎U︎L︎F︎I︎L︎L︎E︎D︎.︎

Yes more. I been wondering when you be coming back.

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Beware of The Man Who Speaks In Hands.

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Seriously, don't fuck with Gaster.

My bro when is the next chapter?

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Next chapter is around 80% finished. Definitely coming in as one of the longest

Now, he was going to teach the human a lesson they would hardly forget.

Chara is going to have a Very, Very bad time. (I can't even get past the 2nd attack on that boss (Or maybe I just suck)) Edit: I made it past the first phase! After using 3/4 of my healing items.
Update 2: I made it past the first phase only using the instant noodles. I still had to use easy mode though, and I cannot make it past the 2nd attack of the 2nd phase.

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god dame it take a like😄

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You'll beat him eventually. Unlike the other bosses where you can pretty much get through all of them in one sitting, Sans actually needs practice to beat and you'll be lucky if you manage to beat him in only a few days. Just stay determined, you'll get there

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