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Omg <3
Sorry I couldn't make it in time for your contest, but I hope you enjoy! Thank you for inspiring me to write!

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Hope there's more incest impregnation out of you soon, dude. Because for me, this story just works.

annnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnd she gives birth to a colt!

It ends too soon :C

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Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-It's nice how they're all so casual and matter-of-fact about it.
-Cadance secretly watching them was also a really nice touch.
-Cadance's womb could only bare one child -- bear.
-I think the sex scene could have been drawn out a little bit more, maybe with more than one position.
-But the pacing wasn't bad, and the story did manage to actually be satisfying, despite being fairly short.

To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 93/100
Allure: 85/100
Enticement: 90/100
Immersion: 87/100
Prose Quality: 89/100
Total Score: 444/500
The more specialized scores for individual prizes, as well as the results of the community poll, will be published when the full results are announced. If this story wins any awards, there will be another post in the story comments sometime after June 9th announcing that this story has won.

Thank you for participating, and thank you for contributing to Fimfic's collection of clop!

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Thank you for reading and rating my story! I appreciate the in-depth analysis, especially with how many stories you have to go through!
I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! <3

Anti-contraceptive spells did wonders, but...

'Anti-contraceptive spells', huh? So fertility spells then? don't think that's what you meant. Other than that, can never have enough Flurryarmor incest inbreeding stories. :3

Toxic by Melanie Martinez plays in the background.

"And we want to her to be as comfortable as possible for this. That means doing things her way." Shining's voice held steady as he reassured his wife that this was the right thing to do. Underneath it though, there was a slight hint that betrayed his intentions.

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Thanks for the catch. Even rereading it 4 times all the way through leaves some errors ^^;

Hm I wish we had a prequel :x

Good story but a bit of fun dialogue would certainly done no harm :)

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For your faithful students... Deliberately