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thatguyfromkfc
I'm British, I write sad-fics, play Minecraft and watch ponies.
thatguyfromkfc
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What do you guys think so far?
*shrug*
72762
I like the idea, though I think you need to add more detail to certain bits. For example, where and why were there weapons in the bakery?
Also, you may need to work on the reactions of the character.
Other than that, this has some good potential.
72823
It's basically knives and other objects that could be used in self defense.
Umm... erm... you see, this is... well...
What is this?
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What? You asked....
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
so....is this written from tomb's perspective?
also, when you continue this, what happened to the surrounding citites, were they ALL destroyedf? good concept stemmed from a good song.
72937>>72948
U mad?
72954
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No.. but i think you are. Sit down Sonny, Real Bronies are writing stories here.
72960
Another troll account...
Still, I give him credit, he accomplished what he set out to do.
72964
Troll Account?
BOY, You come say that to me again ill shove those words right up yer ARSE!
Aside from you obviously making that up on the spot, I give you credit for what you set out to do.
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
72968
What?
No, no, no! I meant the writer! I meant thatguyfromkfc!
I'M SO SORRRRRRRYYYYYYY!!!!!!
72980
dammit.
Apologies My friend. Here Have a song: Nightmare Night : Wooden Toaster
Meh. Good interpretation, bad execution. I loved the song, but i managed to read this entire thing before the song finished.
Also, if i may suggest what this story needed, it needed detail, as stated before, and more explination. Why is he insane?
Not good fic is not good.
72980
I am a real brony and I'm not a troll account.
73020
Then take my word for it- you'll find people will appriciate your stories more if you spend more time on them. Instead of aiming to have a 1000 word fic out every 1 to 3 days, extend them, check them (or get somepony to proofread them beforehand), and then submit them.
Remember, more time > better quality.
hello, i have made a group for fanfics based off of livingtombstone's "September", and your fanfic has been added to this group
it is a relatively new group, thus little to no members as of yet.
well anyways, here is a link to the group:
September by Living Tombstone Based Fanfics
new members are welcome and encouraged to join.