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GunfStep


What am I doing on THIS side of the rock?

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Ten years ago you left Ponyville, intent on traveling Equestria and seeing the world.

At least, that's what you told everyone.

As you make your way back. You realize you never should have left in the first place.

Spoilers: Takes place after the Series Finale
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This whole short was inspired by the incredible picture done by xieyanbbb

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Comments ( 16 )

This was excellent. And I can understand where he was coming from. To see someone accomplish do much and to have nothing to even come close to marching those accomplishments can be devastating to an individual's confidence. Very touching. Very well written too. I wish them both all the best

I’d like to think this is in the same universe as This

This was a joy to read!

Oh I knew it was only a matter of time before that wonderful art piece would inspire a fic!

I absolutely adored your story!

ngl this was a great read! 👏

What beautiful and touching story. Thank You! :raritystarry:

stupid onions...

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Thanks for the kind words :D

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The best ASMR

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Thanks!

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Its quite possibly the most gorgeous art of Rarity. An incredibly serene piece.

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Thank you very much!

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Who keeps cutting these things?!

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Any chance of a sequel? IF so maybe a reference or two about the ASMR?

SC14 #11 · March 7th · · ·

Wow. Its been a while since I liked a story this much. Very good my friend!

“None of that now. We may have lost some time together. But we still have much more left. I intend to see to that. Let’s call it a new beginning.”

I will say though, I wish Rarity would've assuaged his feelings of inadequacy instead of just brushing them aside as she did. I would've liked a little pep talk from Rarity where she points out what makes him special and worthwhile and why his worries were unfounded. That's my only gripe/suggestion I have. Everything else is perfect.

Idk how youd do it,but more of this please

This was sweet, adorable, tear-jerking, and heartwarming. A well-written story that made me feel warm and fuzzy inside.

Considering how long he's been gone, I couldn't help but think about this old song.

Onion ninjas probably came back again.

Late to reading this, but I’m glad I did. And the song at the end is the perfect finish to this.

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