~~~ FEATURED ON 3/14/22 ~~~
A year ago, you got up from your couch to grab a drink, and vanished. At least, that's what you assume people back home think. As it turns out, a one in a trillion cosmic mishap landed you face-down in a land full of magical talking horses and friendship.
You've settled in to this new world as best you can, but what are you supposed to do when familiar feelings begin bubbling toward your best friend, who happens to be one of said talking horses? Join her on a road trip, of course!
Oh, and maybe share your feelings along the way.
CONTENTS: Anon, Romance, Feels, Kissing, General Sappiness, and An Adorkable Alicorn.
It better not take 5 years for the next chapter then
wow, anxiety is coming in for a kill :P
keep it up!
Well, this is pretty well written (considering you had 5 years one would hope it was)
Can't wait to see more!
The writing is great and I have to say that, like the others said previously, I really hope we can see more of this story and yeah, preferable sooner rather than later, like that mentioned 5 years gap...
That would be torture and simple evil after this very promising start, so please, pretty please with a sugar on top, don't abandon this one and as a big Twilight with a human fan, I do really looking forward to see more. :)
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I doubt it will take me five years to make the second installment. Four at most, probably.
Kidding. I'm already working on it as we speak. Hopefully done by March 1.
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I'm glad you like it!
And I'm glad you all think it's good so far. I always worry the stuff I publish is crap.
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yay march 1st!!!!
but seriously, keep it up!~ it is a great start to something awesome!
Here's to hoping people will take notice & hopefully show up on featured! 🍻
Yeah, a one week trip with Equestrais biggest trouble magnet/ Spaz pony...what could go wrong?
Haven't seen much good Second-person fics out there lately, much less one about the adorkable Twilight Sparkle herself! This was a great read so far.
I'll be watching this closely.
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I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. I'm hoping to have the next installment done in a couple of days and uploaded early next week
Thanks for reading!
D'awwwweeee this was an adorable read!! The gradual build-up of feelings is the part I like best, I think. I hope it continues on from here!
The fight scene was written just fine! A brief exchange like that suits the more "Romance" aspect of the story better, seeing as it isn't the main emphasis of the moment.
Can't wait till one of them spills the beans to each other, lol. Either way, congrats on getting Featured! You definitely deserve it.
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Thank you! I'm really looking forward to the part where they spill the beans. I already have an idea of how it's going to go in my head, but we'll see what happens All I know is that it's going to be sappy and adorable.
So close to saying it XD
KEEP IT UP!!!~
new update! patiently waiting for tha next chapter...
Adorkableness!!!
commenting again to say that i like that this anon isn't the typical sardonic, fearless, gary stu that has no regard for his personal safety. feels a bit more believable
I think you meant to do " instead of :
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I did. Must have escaped my revisions. I will fix it when I can. Thanks!
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That's what I'm going for. I want to make a HiE fic, not necessarily AiE. The Anon tag is there mostly just because my human doesn't have a name.
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Who do you think is going to be the one to spill the beans?
After that first chapter I was really hopeful to see something I didn't see probably for years now, a cute, nicely written Twilight with a human story that's not rushed and isn't finished in one chapter. .. and I can honestly say now that you delivered in that regard so thank you!
I'm really looking forward to see more of this story. :)
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I was side-eyeing this fic, concerned I’d just be disappointed again if I read it. Now I’m gonna read it, because of your comment.
On the road again I can't wait to get on the road again the life I like is making music with my friends I can't wait to be on the road again
Aaaaaa! It’s too adorable to stop! But I have to wait.
Finally something that doesn’t fall flat!
This.
The romantic buildup.
This is what I live for.
Congrats again, Spinner! We need more wholesome HiE like this out there. Pony snuggles are best snuggles!
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You and I are of a kind, I swear. Reading all your fics, it's like we're meant to be friends.
Pony snuggles are the best snuggles, surpassed only by pony smooches. Glad you're having fun reading! Hopefully the next update won't take as long.
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And the adorableness will go on, I promise you! Thank you for taking a chance on my fic.
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*goes to peruse Ery’s story list*
edit: Oh, hay, I just read that Izzy one. But they’re all so short! Another person who I want to read a long fic from!
Such a great read so far!!! Excited for the following chapters
Btw, feel free to lean aaaaallllllllll the way in on the sappiness (when appropriate obviously), these two have such great chemistry so far I love it!
cuteness overload!!!~
keep it up!
Great stuff, keep it up friend
looking forward to more of this story!
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I'm glad you're enjoying. I just finished my rough draft of Chapter 5, so expect an upload in a few days time!
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Sweeet.
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NICEEEEE looking forward to this story for the past few months
There's only two things holding you back you to tell your feelings an age and if she is ageless then you will die of old age
Such a lovely chapter! A wild ride of bittersweet emotions, this was.
Looking forward to more! Let's just hope Shining Armor approves of our dear little Anon having feelings for his sister. That being said, I'm staying tuned.
Great job again, Spinner!
And now the most terrifying trial of all...
... Brother complexes!!!
Great chapter friend, looking forward to seeing how this goes
YAY! Can't wait to read this new chapter when I get home!
Absolutely loving this story so far, your writing style inspires story ideas of my own in my head! Definitely looking forward to the next chapter
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Congratulations on getting out of your shell. It's not easy. I have been around this website since season 2. I've seen many people come and go. But I have never had the courage to post anything. It's intimidating you know? Good job on the story. The premise is actually pretty good it feels very homely. A nice vibe to be sure. Hope to see more. Just don't pressure yourself. That's all I got nice meeting you.
and so the wait begins...
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I actually finished my draft for Chapter 6 yesterday. Getting it proofread now and hopefully it will be up by the weekend :)
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Yay~! I hope you didn't feel pressured because of my comment. Currently writing green of my own and I can relate. The pressure to deliver is *real*.
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Oh no, don't worry! I've just been having some personal issues that have slowed the process down.
Let's hope her brother doesn't walk in in the morning
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That would be awkward
Wait I though she was a Pegasus before she got turned into an alicorn?!
Meanwhile inside her head…
You get shipped, and you get shipped, everybody gets shipped
Insert sex joke here
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I do believe the "mere unicorn" section is in reference to Twilight, not Cadance.
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got it thank you