Softer than the Rocks

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SuperPinkBrony12

SuperPinkBrony12 #1 · Nov 2nd, 2019 · · ·

This is actually pretty cute, I've never seen a padded Maud story before. I'm curious as to what else Pinkie and Maud will do together.

Yosh-E-O

Yosh-E-O #2 · Nov 3rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

What a wonderful story! I think you captured Pinkie Pie and Maud very well. Pinkie's thoughts and ords, to me, were quite spot-on. Maud was also 'Maud' and her reaction to being 'caught' was right up there with any other reaction she had.

I wonder if Mud Bryer would partake in this sort of activity with maud? I'm sure the conversations would be most interesting.

There were a few spelling troubles but nothing to break the quality flow of the story. So nicely done!

I hope you continue to write. You have a great way of telling this sort of tale. Most will have the finder of the Adult Foal get into it, or be a hard sell to let it be 'okay'. You just let Pinkie be Pinkie and she just decided it wasn't for her when her mind told her so.

I do like how Pinkie dared to ask if Maud used her diapers for a restroom and Maud said she'd answer honestly but did Pinkie really want to have that question asked. Very in-character.

Overall a story that more-than-exceeded my hopes for a tale of this nature. It's unique and something a lot of folks can benefit from reading to get a nice view on the 'what ifs?' of having been, or fearing, being found out.

Nobody 'chooses' to have comfort in diapers and foolish attire. Though it is a choice to accept it and be respectful while knowing it isn't the worst thing you could desire for comfort.

Wandering Pigeon

Wandering Pigeon #3 · Nov 3rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

I'm really liking this so far. If you'd never mentioned this was your first fanfic I never would have guessed. Fingers crossed we get more soon!

SuperPinkBrony12

SuperPinkBrony12 #4 · Nov 18th, 2019 · · ·

You know, there's something I just thought of: Is this taking place before Maud meets Mudbriar? Because if not that might be an avenue to explore, whether or not Mudbriar knows about Maud's interest.

Lunasmyhero