• Published 8th Oct 2019
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The Tantabus of Twilight - Honeydrops



Desperate to escape a leftover ‘gift’ of the Tantabus, Twilight seeks the true origins of Luna’s nightmare. Surely the creature could be used for much more pleasant experiences. Right?

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Comments ( 57 )

Oh Honey, I havent even read it yet and the spoilers are .... v. Sexy.

Honestly I feel the same as 9871823 here, just the content spoilers are enough to get my attention.

I approve. Very much so.

So... I honestly thought it was going one way, and it didn't. Great story as always and can't wait to see what else you have planned.

Will there be a short side stories of her first changed victims? I mean in more than a single sentence. There would be four chapters total, if we count one chapter per each of them. (couple can be put in the same chapter)

“I was thinking we could eat in, Spike. We do have a lot to talk about. Including how you’ll be serving me from now on.”

"serving me"

:rainbowderp:

All of my yes.

Comment posted by SweetBathory deleted Oct 8th, 2019

Ooh, that was good. Spike, make sure to drink plenty of fluids. You'll need it.

A stallion in Tall Tale found himself transformed into the image of a beautiful mare with bat-like wings and a need to feed on the lust of her lovers.

*sigh* If only... :fluttercry:

This was amazing! And no anal! PERFECT!

9871823
Heeeee, sometimes I think putting those there are silly, but, it does let people know what to expect... and what to like~!

9871982
Heeeee, any one in particular, hun~? These are usually my go-to fun-time tags~!

9872135
Judoon (the commissioner) said pretty much the same thing~! What did you expect hun~? I'd really love to know~!

9872312
Imma change the way the story looks so each chapter has like "Twilight - Dreams and Nightmares" so you know which character it's about~! I didn't really wanna do a bunch of sequels, people don't like them~! So all new stuff will be here and every character will get to have as much fun as Twi~!

9872356
:3 :3 :3

There's a lot of ways Spike can serve her now... some even Twilight doesn't know~!

9872748
Heeeee, thanks, hun~! And yes, yes he will~!

Then again, if Twilight's time with Spirit means anything, he might be able to get some from the tap~!

9872991
Hey, Twilight just became a Tantabus. She'll probably need some time to adjust. Might even be more power spikes along the way~!

9873016
Well, the Tantabus wasn't exactly there to tell Twilight the truth in all things~! Heeeee~!

9873192
blushy blushy. D'awwww~! Thank you, sweetie~!

9873305
You jus' messing with me or you bein' cereal with me? I was just making a joke. xP

Comment posted by Hamburgertime deleted Oct 9th, 2019

9873479
Me? Mess with you~? Why would I EVER do that, hun~?

9873296
I just meant that I'd been very excited for *this* one to come out, far be it from me to rush sexy genius. :twilightsmile:

9873300
An interesting angle... ;)
9873309
Truth be told I honestly thought it was sorta going by the image for the story but... it’s fun~
again great read and I’m a bit envious on your writing. Great work! xD

9873309
Personally I was expecting Twi to turn herself into a new tantabus, not get corrupted into one

This story was really fun to read, those last few chapters especially. I look forward to AJ turning into a seapony quite a bit. Great work, Honey!

9873307
Corruption, mind control and asset expansion. Those three in particular get me going like nothing else, though mostly for the loss of control and descent into debauchery. Watching someone go from smug and professional (or in Twi's case, prudish and repressed) into a total fuckslut cumdumpster is unbelievably hot. You trade well in these things, Honeydrops! :twilightsmile:

And I totally didn't participate in an off-site ERP scene involving those three, no ma'am.

So, this story's complete, yet more is being added to this? I'm guessing from your phrasing that the additions will be to this particular story?

9873543
It's so true~! The only thing that makes me not perfect is all my genius is focused on sexy stuff. Rest of life~? Not so much~!

Wait, I think I might be looking at this wrong...

9873630
Yeah, the pic was commissioned by Judoon before he saw the final version. That was his original idea for it, but my imagination wanted something more detailed than a simple "Twilight screwed up a spell." I've done that and it's super sexy, but I thought I could have more fun with this~!

9873692
Heeeee~! That's what everyone thinks, but I was exploring my corruption kink when I started this, so I wanted something more in-depth. Corruption is more fun, I think... it's still you... but not~!

9873726
Thank you, sweetie~! Honestly, that one's gonna be HARD. I have no idea how I'm gonna do that~! Well, had one idea, and... AJ might not be the only underwater apple...

9873771
You have great taste, hun~! I love me some corruption and mind control. Expansion varies (I don't normally go hyper), but there's always some sluttification of the body~!

And I dunno why, but I think you're lying about the ERP. And I'm totes jealous. So insanely jealous. I'd love to find somepony who'd want to do that all to me~!

Thank you, hun~! I'm so happy you loved it~!

9873940
Yeah, it's like Part One of a big book, but since I'm gonna make every Part completely readable on its own, it'll be added to when I'm ready for the next one~!

9874087
:P

Only after you say lots and lots of good things about this story, snarky snark~!

9875329
Well it's still good! Can't wait to see what's next. I have a feeling that it's going be some sexy spooks :P
(Not the scary kind, the sexy kind)

9875356
We'lllllll seeeeeeee~! Spike got already pretty spooked~!

9875359
And more spooks will come :3

First story i read from you and Christ that was hot!~

Pretty sure Spike's about to lose... but I hope he at least puts up a semi-decent fight.

Overall, this was both hot and well edited/proofread. Should be interesting to see the next part and how it plays out.

I so pick Rarity.
if we are doing the whole sluts don't need any outfits, then why keep a skillful mare like her in play?

I feel your setting up for a sequel and even if your not there is still a huge amount of potential that you could use to easily make one. Also I can see poor spike getting gender swapped and losing his memories on what Twilight looked like originally making him think that she was always part Tantabus in the sequel.

9875953
Eeeee~! Thank you, hun~!

9876093
We'll seeeeee~! He'll need to have a good reason, I mean, if Twi's looking like that... she's hard to resist~!

9877420
I'm gonna have so much fun with her~! Everypony's in for a SUPER good time with that cute little thing~!

9883873
Oooooooooh~! Hun, that's a great idea~! I might use that~!

9902741
No problem! ^_^

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