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Shimmer_Bolt


To write is to create entire universes. You are a god. But will you be a kind god or a cruel god? Unfortunately, many are cruel, simply to entertain other gods.

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Looking forward to more 😃

9681584
Don't worry. You'll get more. We've already got the second chapter finished and will post it today. :ajsmug:

Oooooooo love it. Can't wait for more. I think Derpy and Spark will be cute together. :heart:

9711530

Which part is so cute? I'm just curious to know. :raritywink:

He's a bicorn?

I hope u r ok. Please be safe.

Very entertaining and different.

I look forward to more.

The Monk
"Knowledge is power and power corrupts, so study hard and be evil." - Reykan

Hope nothing broke during your earthquake

Good update.

I rather like this story. Its an interesting premise and a likable character as well.

Im glad the story is alive

The Monk
"Knowledge is power and power corrupts, so study hard and be evil." - Reykan

A perfect family those 3 will be when Spark's marrys her.

Hugs for Sparks.

Fluttershy doesn't have a high enough reputation to unlock Voltage's backstory yet.

A thought came to Starlight's mind as she heard this. "You know... back in my village, I was quite the party pony. I could teach you."

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Rainbow Dash looked at the odd water in her cup, reluctant to drink it. "So uh... you wouldn't happen to have any hot chocolate, would you?" She asked hopefully.

"I'm sorry, Dash. I'm fresh out," she replied before sipping her own tea. The cyan mare groaned as she looked back at her tea again before taking a slow sip, drinking it anyways. She quickly gave a slightly disgusted look as she placed the cup on the table, just staring at it carefully.

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If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?

YEAH! you updated!!!! U get a Pinkie Face :pinkiehappy:

10090093
I am not sure. It's the other author's OC.


10090101
Thank you.

10090093

Hmm, never thought about that.

To be honest, I would go with a similar voice for me, though if I had to pick something else I would say a bit higher pitched than Cheese but with the same shyness of Fluttershy and with Rainbow's accent.

Though that's just me. In reality it's whatever you, the reader, gives him. At least that's what I would like to think :pinkiehappy:

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Yes, and there will be an update soon.

Pretty good fic. Can't wait for more.

As he continued thinking it over, he began to freak out a little. Normally when two ponies do such things they become a couple, at least from what he has heard. Now that they did it, does...does that mean...
Thankfully, Rainbow guessed what was going through his mind and quickly reacted to comfort him. She patted his back with a wing, blushing as she looked away. "Look... it's not a bad thing. This stuff happens. And it doesn’t mean we have to hook up either. Um... but it's not like you should be ashamed of it. I should've stopped when I heard you... moaning."
Hearing her words did comfort him a bit and looking at her, he asked, "Y-You...sure that...that it's ok? W-We’re not...not a couple?" The last thing he wanted was to offend her.
She nodded. "It was just a one-time thing. Sure, you can feel embarrassed, but not ashamed. Believe it or not, I...I've been down that whole shame road before."
This caught his curiosity. "Y-You have?"
"Y-Yeah..." She looked the other way. "Done a few things...with a Wonderbolt..."
Now he is very curious. However, seeing her look away he guessed that she didn't wish to talk about it

I was bored and giving this fun little story another listen when it got to this section and I had to stop it to give the Author a serious thumbs up.

This is a fantastic real life adult outlook to sex. Its a nice change of pace to see a character treat sex the way older single adults do in real life.

So 5 points to the Author, Very well done.

The Monk
“and brought her muzzle to his ear. “If you so much as hurt one little hair on her head, I’ll feed you to my cock,” she hissed.” -Some Leech

10090093
I picture him having the voice of Xander from Buffy the vamp hunter.

I think its a good midrange voice.

Monk
“A spider’s got to spider.” -Scarheart

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I can approve of this.

"I'm really sorry, sugarcube, but if you can't buck apples, you won't be of much help around here. It's our main job."

After all the shit she just listed earlier and she can't have him do anything else? Sounded like to me she just didn't want him working there so she came up with some half assed excuse. So what if he cant "buck apples", have him pick them up, fetch new buckets, help load the wagon, work the town apple stand, feed the farm animals, help keep the farm Tidy and clean, etc I could go on.

Dont give a damn grocery list on work that needs doing and then because they cant do one thing you bar them from everything.

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I'm gonna be honest...I agree with you. When writing this part of the story in, I noticed that it wouldn't really fit with how he couldn't get a job there cause of what you already pointed out. We just haven't really thought of a way to fix it at the moment, plus there have been a few other things that we have been working on as well.

Will Rainbow – get jealous of this

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