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I think Twilight's best pony because I relate to her the best.

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You can find all kinds of stuff in a clinic waiting room. Uncomfortable chairs, a TV that's maybe a decade out of date, stacks of years-old magazines, cranky patients. Flash Sentry manages to find a new friend.

Story is set roughly 1-2 years prior to when the first Equestria Girls movie would have started.

Written for FlashLight Week 2019 Day 5

Prompt of the day: Gloom

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 17 )

Okay, that was both depressing and heartfelt. How the hell do you manage to do that?

Okay, I think you’ve done a really good job with expanding on these characters in this AU! It totally makes sense that Twi wouldn’t talk to anyone aside from her brother, and it’s honestly so well written that I was crying of sadness and laughing cause of ze funny lines at the same time.

That was really depressing but at the same time felt heartfelt when Twilight and Flash told each other their stories. Odd combination but you made it work.

This was definitely a different topic than you usually write. But you make it work beautifully. Definitely going in my favorites.

This is somehow depressing, heartfelt, and uplifting. Good job.

Little did Flash know he was about to enter his first relationship... with Sunset and they never meet again until the Friendship Games...
Sorry, but that's the real tragedy of the story.

Oh one slight critic, guys while one forth as likely to attempt suicide then girls, are four times more likely to succeed... mainly because guys use more... resolute means of ending it, like jumping off a tall building, stepping into on-coming traffic, a gun, hanging. slitting wrists is something girls are more likely to do... not being sexist, but that's the truth, in this Twilight would be more likely to attempt then Flash, but Flash would more likely succeed then Twilight...


Beyond that, not a bad story.

9679653
Well, he can't overcome suicidal ideation if he succeeds. Therefore, he doesn't.

9679656
:ajbemused:I think you missed my point... I think it would have been more impactful if Flash did go through but was saved just in time. However this is all a red herring, as I started my comment with what I find to be the actual tragedy of the story, the two never meet again until the Friendship Games and they have mostly forgotten each other...just something to think about.

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I thought that indicated that it was part of your Flashlight series

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Yes, mom, should I also write a report of that for dad.:pinkiehappy:

9679801
I don't use the AU tag on my FlashLight series because even though it diverges from Equestria Girls from Season 2 onwards, I didn't think it was divergent enough to warrant one. Also, Flash's grandmother dies in this story, and she's still alive in my series. :ajsleepy:

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