• Member Since 25th Jan, 2019
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King Genesis


"It's only teenage wasteland..."

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Spike gets lost in Everfree Forest and finds a mysterious book filled with unknown languages and strange drawings, and is written by an unknown pony.

Spike decides to study it, but it seems that it'll be a long, long adventure that can't abandon.


This is a story I've been writing along with The Graceful Articuno. If you want to check his stories, click on his nickname.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 21 )

9436920
You're right, my child. :moustache:

9436933
Maybe you're right, my quote there is just a little bit generic and forced. I think I'll modify it using your advice. Thank you!

9437001
Interesting and deep skills.
I have problems describing events in English because I'm not English. :twilightsheepish: That's the problem.
I'm a lot better in Spanish.

So this is the story you were working on?

Well, the premise is quite good and I think there is something worth checking out.

I would also try to tell you about the mistakes you did and how to improve on them but The Graceful Articuno already did beyond what I could even try to do with effort.

Best wishes, I'll be tracking.

9437172
I'd say yes and no at the same time.
I mentally created this story some days ago, while creating my account, but I didn't wanted to write it because I was focused on another project, a story that I created years ago called "Waters".
I have also another story that I created along with A Book, called "Join In", with Pinkie Pie as the protagonist. I'll work later on it.

9437180
You're right.
I admit that I'd like to read a story from you.

9437196
Yeah, it happened with my first two projects. I waited like 3 days but well, there they are. :twilightsheepish:

9437201
Yep. This story was uploaded with that feature. It took only 10 minutes!

9437180

Well, you've done a good job so far.

9437187

I'll be waiting for those as well then.

9437596
Waters is already published, only 6 chapters. I need to rewrite some parts though. I rated it M because of references to narcotics, violence and sex. That's why it is "hidden" inside my profile. :trixieshiftleft:
On the other hand, I haven't started with "Join In" yet. I'll start it another day.

Hum. I can see the story progressing but the pacing is too wild and there's little description to give us a proper idea of how the story is progressing. There's also Zecora not rhyming, which I understand it's difficulty, but I think that the idea can be improved.

9438855
Oh boy. I didn't even remember that Zecora made rhymes with her words.
Gotta watch MLP again.

Well, too bad. But I understand, not all stories get to be written.

Why was this cancelled?

10393656
I was writing this with another user called The Graceful Articuno, but I found out months ago he deleted his FIMFiction account and hasn't talked to me ever again. I tried to continue this story on my own but I simply wasn't convinced while doing it. I have lots of stories on my mind but this is not one of them, so that's why I cancelled it.

10393663

That’s a shame :(

10393762
Yeah, it's a pity... but at least I'll keep writing other projects I have in mind.

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