Amber Onyx was a novel writer, on a secret mission. He was tasked to secure and deliver a chemical, that could make a pony rule the world.
There was only one problem. A beautiful mare with her own secret mission.
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'Earthen' as used here would mean she is made from an earthen substance, like clay. Something tells me Sweetie Drops isn't made of pottery.
A very nice story my friend. Personally I am not a fan of the 1st person perspective but you pull it off rather well.
There's a mare that lives a life of danger
To every Stallion she meets, she stays a stranger...
And I'm sure you know the rest. Cute short, I'm sure you could expand upon this story easily.
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I originally wanted to expand on this, follow Amber Onyx on his search. But I had no idea on further happenings and I like it as a one off scene.
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Thanks! I actually find first-person easier to write.
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I was trying to make it sound more exotic. Earth pony just doesn't have that feel, while "earthen mare" does. But I'm not sure whether it should be a thing or not.
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In that case, capitalizing it would be best, but then you might have to do so with words like 'Pegasus' and 'Alicorn' as well as 'Unicorn' and 'Crystal Pony' to keep the trend.