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RainbowDash1990


Hi! I'm RainbowDash1990! I enjoy making snuggly/cute fanfictions! Feel free to donate to me on patreon to help support me! https://www.patreon.com/rainbowdash1990

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After finally racking up the courage to tell Twilight something a little personal, she is left feeling heartbroken and alone at her friend's reaction. Will Rainbow Dash accept her apology? Or will things never be the same between them again?

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well that was cute :twilightsmile:

9432546
Thanks! Exactly what I was going for! x3

Cute story, but not really a lot of substance. I know what you were going for, but...That's it?

9432818
Yeah, that was my first thought as well. Cute story, but not really a lot of substance beyond that.

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9432818

I see! Could you please elaborate? Could you pick out anything in particular, or was it just a general thing? x3

really adorable ;3

Awww this is just fluffy I really liked it, uhh tip with coming into that new scene on the cliff, I think it would've been nice for there to be an introduction cause suddenly they were just at a cliff, just a tiny bit of context would've been nice. Besides I did enjoy the story. Keep it up :twilightsmile:

9433627
It's just fluff, that's all that it is. The issue is, there was no prior buildup to this relationship, and to be honest, Rainbow felt like she was overreacting just a tad.

9433781
Thank you for your comment! I'll keep this in mind~!


9434169
Yeah, now that you mention it, you might be right. Thanks for your comment - I'll definitely take it into consideration for future stories! x3

Bit short, but nice fluff.

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