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On a frosty winter's evening, Twilight Sparkle is out on a lonely hilltop all by herself waiting for a rare astronomical phenomenon to occur; while waiting, she has a strange encounter with some mysterious force that soon resolves itself into an all-too-familiar form. She quickly learns that the only thing which can improve a once-in-a-lifetime experience is having somepony close to her to share it with.

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This was really adorable and a nice take on the friendship between Twilight and Rainbow. They both felt in character and meshed well together.

Great. Now I wanna go stargazing.

Kneel before the majesty of the cosmos Rainbow.

This could've easily turned into a romance fic, but I actually think it works better as a friendship fic. Very well done and in-character, though there were a few minor plotholes (Twilight could've teleported to the Castle, even from long distances; she didn't consider that Starlight may have given her the supplies; just how did Rainbow dress her in boots without lifting her off the ground, etc.), but they don't detract from the story overall. And you managed to convey a lot in a relatively short one-shot.

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