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Creativa-Artly01


Epileptic-autistic eldest of four, artist, creative, and horse crazy girl who is obsessed with entertainment media and history among other things.

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Twilight makes Shining spit out his embarrassing middle name in front of Cadence when she's babysitting. He can't help but be embarrassed and also really mad with his baby sister.

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Not a bad story, but the narration leaves something to be desired. It's not first person. It's not third person. I don't think it even qualifies as second person. Other than that, an enjoyable read.

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I think this barely qualifies as Third-person Omniscient, where the Narrator knows what everyone's thinking. It's not commonly used, given that most stories are written so as to be easily, or relatively easily, converted into screenplays.

This is actually a pretty nice story

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