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This story is a sequel to Nyctophobia


Sequel to 'Nyctophobia'. You asked, I delivered.

Skeleton Grin's finally found the love she's wanted in her foalhood crush and longtime desire Soarin. It's been quite some time since they first met that fateful night in the gardens of Canterlot in light of the Grand Galloping Gala and the pair have not only been married, but have had three fillies.

In a tale of sorrow, abandonment and heart wrenching loss, Skeleton Grin tells her side of the story from start to finish, from where she grew up to how she got her impressive collection of scars that litter her body surprising not only her children, but her love Soarin as well. Will her daughters ever see their patient, ever gentle mother the same again? And will Soarin's perceptions of this mare that he loves so much change for the better or for worse?

Here begins the tale of the ghosts of Skeleton's Past.

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 140 )

I don't care bout the sick and unpleasant shit that is to come i have a very morbid mind so most of it i would probably enjoy :derpytongue2:

O MY GOD that picture is so cute
i meam its manly yea manly thats what i mean

This is going to be so awesome... and sad :fluttercry:
Thank you so much Valor :3 :heart:

I thought only the canterlot ponies had english accents?

ZOMG! Sequel to Nyctophobia? YESYESYESYESYESYESYES -five hours later- YESYESYESyesyes yes. Thank you for making a sequel! :3

AFTER READING: :yay: that is all.

Ghost Charm’s was filled with books. Books on the floor, on the shelves they put up, on the bed, under the bed, in the chest of draws that held her formal wear.

Don't you mean Pepper Pot, not Ghost Charm? I believe that in an above paragraph you said that Pepper Pot was only in the first grade and already reading small novels. If it is wrong, might wanna fix it, had me confused for a sec :pinkiehappy:

Also, yay! I love sequel!

I hope to see good things from you sir. I'm pretty pissed that your story isnt getting as much attention as it deserves but in due time in sure it'll catch the spotlight! Can't wait for more! :rainbowkiss:

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Thanks, I'll fix that.

....Fixed

1038954 I don't know, 20 likes 0 dislikes is good. And even if its not in feature box yet, it is on the list of popular stories on the right hand side of site. That's how I found this in first place, cuz I forgot to through a watch on Valor lol.

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Well i think this deserves 150-200 at least. Its a lot better than many others ive seen with that many likes :moustache:

1039194 Itz cuz most morons on this site hate it if its not clop or adult humor >.<

Before reading: Sequel! :rainbowkiss:
After reading: :yay: :scootangel:

I feel like a foal before bedtime :scootangel:

MOAR!

NEEDS MOAR GREEN THUMBS!!! :flutterrage:

Skeleton Grin used to only have one scar...and then she took an arrow to the side! :rainbowlaugh: Well at least it was worth a try... :applejackunsure:

I get so say first... SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
I love this story

Easily one of my top 3 favorite fics of all time.

Graaaa no sleep for me oh well

Does anyone else just want too dive into the story and give Skeleton a hug??

to help my 3 foals go to sleep i will tell them about my horror filled past that will be fun.nightmares for weeks

Remember when i said i need to sleep ... I Lied :ajsleepy:

Sleep Is For The Weak anyway :pinkiecrazy:

Love it , love you, love the fillies :pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::heart::yay:

Now a well deserved sleep :ajsleepy:

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She's telling them because they asked and she feels it's important for them to know. >.>

hmm, splitterd dreams
1. was at the mayor mansion during the time
2. wears a skull or skull mask
3.red paint that looks like blood
...seems legit.
"but that sound like-"
shut up suspicion.

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Splintered Dreams is a master of deception. He appears in 'Moonlight Guardian' as well.

these storys don't make me feel like this:pinkiesick: they make me feel like this:pinkiehappy: keep up the good work

(i have a sick and twisted mind btw )

If anyone has ever seen Tower Prep, which was the best (cancelled) show ever, they would know what I'm talking about.

The creepy doctor part that's gonna give me nightmares, reminds me of Dr. Specs, who was responsible for wiping the sttudent's memories of how they got to the school. Now I can only hear Dr. Spec's voice. Great, two fucking creepy doctor parts stuck in my head. :pinkiesick:

Keep up the good work
And please don't make one her girls turn crazy, take :pinkiecrazy: for an example

Wow really didn't see that coming :pinkiegasp:

And the last lines (author notes) was WAY too bright :trollestia:

Why can't i jump through this screen to go hug Grin!!!!

Is good I was waiting for something like this to come along. When I think scars I dont think bites I thing Rape, Torture and the worst possible outcomes.

Yay!!! Skeleton got to see her parents again. Soarin you did good today:twilightsmile:

I think i know who splintered dreams is... :moustache:

Yay happy moment:pinkiehappy:
And she met Zecora

Good break from the sad feels for some happy feels! :ajsmug:

Hrm.. I vote for attempting to toss in Soarin' finding Splintered Dreams before having her describe her worst scar. Either way, I'm really enjoying this. Definitely needs more reads and votes than it has.

Man, why doesn't this story have more views? It's really enjoyable, one of my favorites to be honest. Grammar is excellent, story is interesting...seriously.

Grin: 1
Crazy Doctors: 0

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Because people are idiots and they refuse to read a good story just because it's got a tiny bit of grimdark in it.

Come on mates, the bit with the doctor was **that** gory or dark...

Enjoying your story man, it's quite the read. If you want my "two bits" on some ideas, how about try explaining the "mental" scars that she indures that created a "grim" subconscious (that was evident on the first story) that she relied on for survival. After all it is the scars within the mind that carries the most burden am I right? :pinkiecrazy:

I am looking forward to your updates on your fic man, keep up the good work :eeyup:

Soarin pays an investigator to track down the bastard.

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