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The final words of the famous 'Starswirl the Bearded'. Scholar behind some of the most important breakthroughs in magical theory and practice in Equestria. On his last legs he writes what comes, no longer denying what he really thought, and not holding back.

Short, I wrote it in a vent but it turned out okay. It was only a few hundred words, but I hope you guys like it.

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I liked it. I like many things where the imagery and emotion is this strong.

An excellent piece of tragedy, and linking it in that his final request to Celestia had gone unheeded, or was delivered too late, was a great touch to really let it hit home.

gonnnaaa read it laaaateeeer :3

I like it! I feel as if it ties to Twilight somehow, in which Starswirls' lack of social activity reflected upon little Miss Twilight as a foal. Since she studied magic and she seems to be the only one that knows of Starswirl, she may have unconsciously found him as a role model.

But, that's just me. All in all, good read. :twilightsmile:

Amazing work as usual good sir, that stirred my emotions like a pinkie brew
Excellent work yet again my good friend. have a moustache :moustache: or 2 :moustache:

I saw your comment on 'Families', and I know that feeling my friend, so I decided to look at one of your fics.
This was fantastic, I really like Starswirl, and when I saw 'Hearth's warming eve' I let an embarrasing cheer when clover said she was his apprentice.
I really liked his relationship with Luna, especially when he urged Celestia to talk with her, that was clever.
I'm glad to have read this, it really deserves more attention.
All the best.

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