• Published 19th Oct 2018
  • 3,155 Views, 13 Comments

When They Deflate - Magpiepony



Pinkie and Cheese have a lot in common, but they never imagined they would have THIS in common too. These party killers are an unstoppable pair, so you'd better watch out for when they deflate their manes and tails!

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Comments ( 12 )

Your grimdark stories always amazing, Magpie. I can't wait to see what other stories you have planned!

OK mag what's the deal with the Minin scene?

We need more Psycho Party Pony Shipping :pinkiecrazy: This is great!

I think the fanfic reading version has gone better than the original story.

Very good story. Well done, MagPiePony! Also, thanks for reading my letter in Lost's second unboxing video on YouTube!

Now this right here is Black Comedy. I love it.

Why are ratings disabled? that looks concerning

Delightfully deadly, just the way I like it

Nothing better than having TheLostNarrator introduce one to a great fic! Well done! Loved hearing it and reading along! :pinkiecrazy:

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Intensely silly. :P

Pinkie and Cheese were nuzzled on a park bench

I think you mean 'nestled'? Or else the 'were' shouldn't be there. :B

I wish I could upvote this. =V

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