You never really did care much for bugs. So it'd figure that after being magically displaced into pastel pony world, you get kidnapped by pony-sized bugs.
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IS there an actual reason that Anon doesn't feed his 'true love' or whatever to Chrysalis--because it doesn't seem like he's the type of person to save that 'till marriage.
I miss Appy but Vespa is growing on me. Going to be interesting to see how Chryssi handles Queen Ap... while likely not love on the level of Anon/Ap there is a LOT of lust going around.
Also, no sweat on the sex scenes, at least imo. I am here for the story byfar.
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Who do we want?
Queen Apocrita!
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Apocrita! Let's go! For Queen! For Hive! For Apocrita!
Edit: You can take my neutral upvote/downvote ratio, but you shall never take our Queen!
It will be glorious when anon tells Ap that he rode her mom lol xD, nice chapter!
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You're kidding, right? He can't give her something he doesn't feel for her...-.-
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All hail Queen Chrysalis! The one true queen!
Boo to the impostor! BOOO!
You know what, lets do this more fucking difficult and complicated as shit, let anon fuck Vespa into royalty too, and see what happens XD.
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He appears to feel *something* for her! That was the focus of the 2 chapters before Vespa was introduced.
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it appears he is already giving her true love, but the wording he used with vespa in the nursery makes her thing he isnt, as if it were something he can control.
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Hoof licking loyalist scum!
We shall do battle! No one insults the Queen!
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Fine! I shall meet you in glorious combat, the weapons shall be our bare fists!
I dunno why, but that ending felt odd... regardless, nicely done!
Unf!
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Name the place you want to fight and I will most definitely not show up with a gun and it will most definitely only be my fists...
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We want Chryssie! Not some traitorous upstart!
The one and only true queen, Queen Chrysalis!
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bring your gun! my devotion to the true queen will see me to victory!
I'm not that mad about the Queen sex. The double blowjob would have been nice. But you do you. I still love this story and it's daily updates.
Vespa is awesome. We need more changelings like her around. And more Aps. Great, now Anon when he gets them together will probably called them VAPs.
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What's with all these blasphemers!
I will show you the true might of the Apocrital Army!
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It will see you to your defeat!
U can also make a separate story for your clop chapters
Vespa somehow became my favorite character.
Can't wait to see the consequences of Anon's dicking spree.
Hey, about the sex.
The sex scenes so far was to illustrate an important point, develop a relationship, or to manipulate.
Facefucking Chrysalis, although hot, would not have really done anything progress the story. It would just be a facefucking scene.
Compare that to Ap and Anon fucking, that was different and way more important because their relationship, and literally Ap herself evolved from it.
If I wanted a Luna blowjob scene, I'd write it myself or read a fic with the Luna and the S U C C.
I fully expect QueenAp X Anon full fucking though. She needs to be BRED.
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Hail, Brother! The Apocrital Army grows!
I feel like vespa knows about ap giving her actions
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But, when he has the dream chapter...he admits it is not what he feels for Ap, and he loves AP...soooo, kinda hard to give Chrysie true love that belongs to another Bug-mare...
And then someone slips him poison joke.... are humans effected by chaos magic/alchemy?
Also, glad to see someone finally mounting up these horses like they should.
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It's a bit of a juggling game and some hard choices may have to be made, but he can love both truly and honestly. That said, the question is if he can truly love Crysalis for herself or if she will have to dramatically change for that to happen. I don't really know what will happen in that ship but it seems more like a mix of fondness and paternal instincts.
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Hmmm. Reminds me of the war of the Stormcloaks vs the Empire all over again. or the New Lunar Republic vs The Solar Empire. But with less ponies and more bug-horses.
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Darnit! I'm all caught up again!
Irl, i have genocidal fantasies against insects of all kinds, including arachnids and other 'creepy crawlies.' But these lovebugs, I think I can let them slide.
Without reading any of the other comments, I'm kinda focusing on those last few lines.
".....I also recognize that this war, this drive to finally take control of the ponies, is because you're fueling my queen's intentions... and that you came back of your own free will."
I can't tell if this is a subtle hint that Vespa doesn't want to go to war or something like that. Perhaps she thinks war will destroy the hive rather than help it, idk. She already stated that if necessary she break orders if she deemed it wholly needed so it'll be interesting to see how this plays out.
That last line.. Vespa was confused by him returning. Suspicious of why he did it, too.
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...ehh, I don't know anymore. Chrysalis is growing on me. I think I want a third option where everybody gets to live happily ever after.
Well, he feels something for Chrysalis, at least a little, right?
Damn... Character building of the finest grade. Great work
"Dying is easy, young man. Living is harder."
Sex for the stake of sex is boring
Sex with meaning, is better.
Sex with plot, perfection.
Anon grows deeper and somewhat likeable, very big character development for that guy.